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Reviews For Sacrifices
Author's Response: Thank you! Unfortunately, this is one of the very few times we'll be seeing Sirius in this story. He is in Azkaban, so there's not much he can do there to help with this story's events. Thank you for you compliment! ~ RK
Author's Response: Not sure if that is good or bad, but thank you for reviewing, either way. ~ RK
On to the next chappie. Author's Response: Oh thank you. Yes, I planned this out for a long while. I do not even particularly like child fics, and actually Harry only stays very, very young for a few more chapters before there is a bit of a time jump to him being a few years older. And I am tying to stay as close to canon as possible without it being canon (which is rather difficult!) Thank you for leaving reviews they make me so excited to see them!
-P.G. P.S. The part about Kreacher putting out the fire was really well done and sad. Author's Response: Yay! You caught the Kreacher stuff. I was hoping to get some sympathy for Kreacher, because at some points in the canon books, I felt sorry for Kreacher, and wanted to try to convey that... And yes, Remus suspects who has Harry...Thanks for yet another review!
Because the level of writing in this story is very high, I want to mention a problem: "Professor Dumbledore," he greeted. (dialogue) Remus tried to reassure. In both cases, you are missing an object. It should read: "Professor Dumbledore," he greeted him. Remus tried to reassure him. The 'greeted' one really infests fanfic and sets my teeth on edge every time I read it. Author's Response: Thanks for the grammar help! I sometimes miss silly mistakes, and have no problem with someone correcting it (if that person explains why something should be different, even better)! So thank you for that. Sorry about grating your nerves with the "greeted" thing...If I catch it in future chapters, I'll try to substitute it for something else. *sheepish expression* Thank you for reviewing!
Author's Response: Your welcome, and thank you for reviewing. It makes me very excited and happy!
Author's Response: Well, I have a bunch of chapters written, but it got to the point right now where I had to make up a story bible for it, otherwise I would forget my own details. |
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