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Title: Chapter 3 - Decisive News 11 Aug 2012 9:12 am
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed) [Report This]
    Aaahhh, wow!! I loved the conversation between Remus and Sirius. You capture emotions so well.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Unfortunately, this is one of the very few times we'll be seeing Sirius in this story.  He is in Azkaban, so there's not much he can do there to help with this story's events.  Thank you for you compliment!  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 3 - Decisive News 06 Apr 2012 3:22 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, well, nothing to say, sorry

    Author's Response: Not sure if that is good or bad, but thank you for reviewing, either way.  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 3 - Decisive News 08 Aug 2009 4:36 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Very well thought out and planned story. I'm impressed. I hesitated to read at first, because I don't particularly like child fics. I prefer Harry older, but you have intrigued me with your writing and the way you take Canon and give it your own twist.

    On to the next chappie.

    Author's Response: Oh thank you.  Yes, I planned this out for a long while.  I do not even particularly like child fics, and actually Harry only stays very, very young for a few more chapters before there is a bit of a time jump to him being a few years older.  And I am tying to stay as close to canon as possible without it being canon (which is rather difficult!)  Thank you for leaving reviews they make me so excited to see them!
Title: Chapter 3 - Decisive News 06 Aug 2009 6:17 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh, does Remus know who has Harry?

    -P.G.

    P.S. The part about Kreacher putting out the fire was really well done and sad.

    Author's Response: Yay!  You caught the Kreacher stuff.  I was hoping to get some sympathy for Kreacher, because at some points in the canon books, I felt sorry for Kreacher, and wanted to try to convey that...  And yes, Remus suspects who has Harry...Thanks for yet another review!
Title: Chapter 3 - Decisive News 03 Aug 2009 7:35 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonder who told Lupin Dumbledore was a Legilmens? (cough)

    Because the level of writing in this story is very high, I want to mention a problem:

    "Professor Dumbledore," he greeted.

    (dialogue) Remus tried to reassure.

    In both cases, you are missing an object.

    It should read:

    "Professor Dumbledore," he greeted him.

    Remus tried to reassure him.

    The 'greeted' one really infests fanfic and sets my teeth on edge every time I read it.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the grammar help!  I sometimes miss silly mistakes, and have no problem with someone correcting it (if that person explains why something should be different, even better)!  So thank you for that.  Sorry about grating your nerves with the "greeted" thing...If I catch it in future chapters, I'll try to substitute it for something else.  *sheepish expression*  Thank you for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 3 - Decisive News 03 Aug 2009 7:19 am
Reviewer: Rosa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Really nice story. I very much enjoyed every chapter so far. Thanks!

    Author's Response: Your welcome, and thank you for reviewing.  It makes me very excited and happy!
Title: Chapter 3 - Decisive News 03 Aug 2009 5:58 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    I am humbled by your writing style! I'm getting uber jealous right now! lol Really wonderful! I hope you can write a lot as I'm anxious for more of your work! Wonderful chapter!

    Author's Response: Well, I have a bunch of chapters written, but it got to the point right now where I had to make up a story bible for it, otherwise I would forget my own details. 

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