| Title: Chapter 4 - A Message and a Delivery
| 04 Aug 2009 5:22 am
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| Reviewer: Rosa (Anonymous)
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Nice! I'm looking forward to see how Severus is going to explain him suddently having a child with him. Great work. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. Glad you are enjoying it so far. There are a lot of things that will first spiral nearly out of control before Severus gets settled. Stay tuned. Hope I do not disappoint you! Thanks again for reviewing and making me smile by doing so.
| Title: Chapter 4 - A Message and a Delivery
| 03 Aug 2009 11:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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I don't know if your Latin is incorrect, but I was able to decipher most of it sans translation.
How does Severus plan to hide the child's identity if he takes him to Hogwarts? DD will be immediately suspicious.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing a lot. That makes me thrilled! And yeah, I try my best with the Latin, since I do not know it. I try to describe what the spells do after they say them if I make them up so that you don't have to know what they're exactly saying to know what's going on. And yes, Dumbledore would be very suspicious, but once Severus gets back to Hogwarts he is bought time by a series of events happening out of control, which helps him in the long run, because these events keep DUmbledore a little bit distracted...Keep reading, and you'll find out. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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