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Title: Chapter 8 - Clarity 27 Apr 2021 6:02 pm
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    Honestly good riddance like deserved worse than what he said! And get death is her own stupid fault. If he knew harry was his son, he would have made another potion so both of them would live. Instead she was a selfish idiot, deciding everyone else's fates like dumbledore. How dare she decide to keep his child from him and worse with his enemy! And then she has the audacity to slap him-- if sev want a good man he should slap her back!
Title: Chapter 8 - Clarity 13 Aug 2009 6:35 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG!!! That was so sad! So beautifully sad! Poor Sev! I wanted to cry for him! And poor Lily! What a wretched state she was in! O- and poor Remus, not knowing anything! But YAY Filius! I love that little goblin man! Twenty points to him!

    O, my heart broke like ten times when I read this, which means that I totally loved it! (I like the drama *shrug*) But yay for Remus stepping up! Twenty points to him too!

    Again, another wonderful chapter! I look forward to the next!! (PS love the history behind everything, so twenty points to you!)

    Author's Response: Yes, Remus and Flitwick are really important in this story, so we'll be seeing a lot more of those two.  Glad the emotional turmoil carried through.  Glad you are liking it!  And thank you so uch for reviewing.  I get so excited and smile whenever I get a review.  (I'm sure you can sympathize with that feeling.) 
Title: Chapter 8 - Clarity 13 Aug 2009 3:01 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, Sev crying really broke my heart. I also was truly saddened by the scene where Severus thinks the baby is his and then Lily lies and says it's not. I like your explanation for her not telling him too. Beautiful work.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Glad you liked those scenes.  I felt that Severus needed to finally cry here, because he has been strong the whole time so that he could do what he needed to do.  He had no other time to focus on his grief before this point, and after viewng memories like those again, the grief would sink in.  Glad you like it, along with that rather painful memory.  Glad you're still reading!  Thanks for the review! 
Title: Chapter 8 - Clarity 13 Aug 2009 2:31 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked this chapter. I'm glad we got to see some of Severus's and Lily's memories. I hope Severus is going to be ok. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response: He'll be alright, but he has a lot of adjusting to do before he can fully settle and get accustomed to being a father.  I'm writing as fast as I can...As you know my chapters tend to be long...
Title: Chapter 8 - Clarity 11 Aug 2009 10:23 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, that was so sad and sweet. I like how you have Flitwick playing a prominent role in this story.

    Ooh, I just wanted to hug Sev. It must have been very difficult to fool Severus like that, but what choice did she have.

    I love the ending. I laughed when Remus changed the bed clothing to Gryffindor Red, from Slytherin Green!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  When I read that Lily's wand type was good for Charms work, I figured that she would have spent some time with Flitwick, and from there his involvement in the story was born.  Lily, James, and Severus were in one crazy lie, that ended up getting way more complicated than any of them would have imagined.   I'm glad you like Remus.  With all of the things that is messing with his head, the man needs a little familiarity, don't you think?  I love writing Remus.  Thank you for the review!  So excited! 

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