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Reviews For Sacrifices
I also liked her reaction to being asked to play the part of mom. Heaven knows I won't agree to such a thing right away either!! Goodness, what a question to be ask!! And WOW!! The Unbreakable Vow!? Did not see that one coming, but how appropriate! I think I liked that part the best. It fit in there great. And of course POOR SEV! I nearly started to cry when he was so sad, that is until my roommate walked back in and I had to pull myself back together. lol This was very well done, and hopefully I'll have time to read more tonight. For now, I'm off the class! Author's Response: So good to hear from you again! I'm glad you like Ophelia so far. I was nervous about her, and I figured I pretty much had one chapter to really introduce and semi-develop her. And being a Muggleborn Slytherin could not have been a fun thing. What a question to be asked, indeed. Yeah! *happy dance* I was hoping people would be surprised with the Unbreakable Vow, but I wanted her to have a more powerful way to accept the question than by simply saying, "Yes." With an Unbreakable Vow there is much more at stake there. Glad you approve of it. Sorry you almost cried, but I'll take it as a compliment. So nice to hear from you again. Glad to see you are still reading! Yay! Good luck with classes!
I'm so glad that she's changed her mind, and that they can be a family now. Nice chapter. Interested to see what happens next. Author's Response: Thank you for the review! Yes, Tevin is showing a bit of protective temper, but don't mess with him and his Daddy! Glad you're glad she changed her mind. I'll hopefully update soon...Next few chapters are busy...
Author's Response: Sorry (but secretly loving it!) that you cried...Thank you! I'm glad you like the story so far. Things will get a little involved and busy in the next few chapters before...thre new characters come in (who also stay for quite a while)! I am trying to get there as fast as possible...Thank you for reviewing and reading! *offers pumpkin juice*
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm torn between beingn glad you cried and feeling bad for making you cry. Guess the emotion got through, then! (Yes!) I'll try to post soon. Things will get complicated in the next few chapters. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you approve.
Author's Response: I hope that's a good "yesssssss..." there. I hope it is... *smile*
It was really heartbreaking to see Severus having to give up Tevin and Tevin doing his best to not let his Daddy go. Can't wait till the next chapter, I wonder if Tevin is still mad at Ophelia for making his Daddy sad :) it'll be fun if she has to gain the trust of little Snape-Evans lol a force to be reckoned with! Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing again! I figured if anyone was bombarded with a request like that their first instinct would be to say no, until they were either convinced otherwise or had time to think about it. So, I'm glad you liked that. I'm tying to also get Tevin a little more vocal as the story is continuing, because soon is going to be a time jump and he'll be very vocal then. As to him being angry at Ophelia...well, he's a little protective of his Daddy, so she may have some work ahead of her. |
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