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Reviews For Sacrifices
Author's Response: Thank you for your review, and I'm glad you like the story so far. As to your question: Well, they do sleep, or go traipsing around the castle throughout the day. And also, not all of them can possibly be supportive of every headmaster in the history of the school, now can they? There may be more to that, there may not be...We'll have to wait and see... ~ RK
Author's Response: Thank you! Poor Fawkes indeed, but it had to happen. Flitwick disappears for a while after this but he'll be back eventually in his squeaky self, but maybe not as the action star like he was in this chapter. I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far, and hope to hear from you again. Thank you for the review! Thanks for reading! ~ RK
Author's Response: Oh wow! I catch this stuff in my writing usually really fast, so fifty points to you! *fixes that screw up!* I'm almost ashamed of myself for that one! Good for you! Thanks for leaving the review, and pointing that out to me! I would have just continued right along merrily. Thanks! Awesomeness! ~ RK
And Remus with Tevin was so cute!...but will Sev like it that Remus is teaching his son how to fly? Some how I don't think that'll turn out very well. I can just heard it, "What have you done werewolf! Now he's going to break all his bones and he'll die and it'll be all your fault! And then I'll kill you!!" ... Sorry about that. Must be the fever talking. lol Again, nice chapter! (and don't spend those points all in one place! ;) Author's Response: Thanks! There was just Slytherin-ness oozing all over this chapter. *snort* Remember that Remus sent Severus the training broom earlier in the story, so Severus knows that his son learning to fly is inevitable, but what a treat that will be when Tevin shows off won't it? (And poor Remus needed some fun/happy time. Poor guy.) You were sick, my dear? Oh, not good. Hope you are feeling better soon. Thanks for another review! Glad you are catching up...Whoo!
that was AWESOME Author's Response: More is coming soon! Thank you for the review...Writing will be slower now that term has started again for me, but once all of my work and everything is done I am writing as much as possible. Hopefully, it will be posted soon. Thank you for reading. Glad you like it!
Great chappie though. i'm really impressed. If ever I need help in Latin, for one of my stories, can I ask you? Tevin is so cute. I wanna just hug him. Can't wait for the next chappie. Author's Response: Yeah, poor Fawkes, but it was a necessary evil. At least he should be used to burning, though, since he does it naturally. But when you don't expect your own combustion, I guess it is a different story. I'm somewhat guessing at the Latin, having just started dabbling in it, so I may even be way off with it. But, SURE, if you want my help with it...No problem. Oh glad you liking Tevin. I just needed to give him and Remus some happy bonding time. Next chapter is coming. New major characters are introduced, so I hope you like them. *hint* They're familiar to canon...and I personally love them as characters! (So fun to write too!) Okay! It should be up soon.
-P.G. Author's Response: Thank you for yet another review! Even though they knew the spells worked on Mrs. Figg, they had to wait to be sure whether or not they would work on Dumbledore, since it wuold have been done on someone much, much stronger. Glad you like it so far!
So...will Fawkes remember Sev and Ophelia attacking the headmaster? Author's Response: Yes, everyone was a little naughty in this chapter. And about Fawkes...well, we'll see won't we? He could be trouble, he might not be...Thank you for reviewing again!
Author's Response: Thank you, Sheila! Glad you liked it, and love the story! That excites me! |
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