Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Reviews For Sacrifices
Title: Chapter 14 - Protective Measures 21 Sep 2009 7:42 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww!!!! I absolutely LOVED Lucius in this!! I loved the whole dang Malfoy family!! They're so CUTE!!! This was amazing! I really, REALLY enjoyed this chapter! You kept Lucius, Lucius, but you also gave him charater, rather than just a rich snotty arse. Very good!

    My favorite part had to be when he was bumping into people and only apologizing if they looked important enough. XD That was great! And him thinking he was better than Dumbledore: classic!

    I really enjoyed this one (did I say that twice? Oh well, it's the truth) This probably made my whole sad day. Thanks!! Another fifty points to you!! :D

    Author's Response:

    Ooh, two in one day!  This is slowly making my morning amazing!  I'm so giddy that you liked my Malfoys.  I think I stated this in a review to you, but that family completely fascinates me, and interests me (particularly Lucius, but all of them are beyond interesting to me).  They were way too much fun to write.  I was excited to get to this chapter since somewhere around Chapter 9 or something. Glad you think I fleshed out Lucius well.  And he would only apologize to people of importance, being so proud.  Glad you liked this chapter.  It was so far one of my favorites to write.  Thanks for another review!  Two in one day!  Agh! 

Title: Chapter 14 - Protective Measures 14 Sep 2009 8:56 pm
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    Baby Draco is cute. :)

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I always thought Draco would be a cute child.  *grin*  Thanks for the review and the reading! 
Title: Chapter 14 - Protective Measures 12 Sep 2009 5:06 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a very exciting chapter, and you wrote Lucius and Narcissa so well. You captured a side of them, that you don't really see till the end in Canon; how much they love Draco, and that they would stop at nothing to protect him.

    I loved the little scenes with baby Draco. could just imagine him with his baby-fine, white blond hair, and large gray eyes, pale porcelain complexion. Can't stand Draco's character in Canon, but he must have been a beautiful baby nevertheless.

    Lovely chapter, and I'm so gad that Narcissa was able to tell Lucius in time. I can't wait for the next chapter. Good luck in school though!

    Author's Response:

    I've been dying to write this chapter since I started the story.  I have the whole thing mapped out, I just need to get there.  I find the Malfoy family completely fascinating, by the way, and have enjoyed writing them way too much!  (They're around a lot more!)  I loved that sentence in the last book about Lucius and Narcissa running through the battle screaming for their son and not fighting.  (If that sentence is not in the film, I will spazz out!  That sentence NEEDS to be there!)  Don't worry though, the Malfoys will still have their pureblood supremacy attitudes in this.  I'm just tweaking them a tiny bit.  But yes, that family is completely fascinating to me.  All three of them (besides Severus and Remus) are my favorite characters.  Thank you so much for the reviews and with sticking with this story!  I've never gotten this far in my stories, so I am very excited.  Hope you keep reading! 

    ~ Raven Knight

Title: Chapter 14 - Protective Measures 12 Sep 2009 2:55 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter--it was nice to see things from the Malfoy perspective. I loved baby Draco's cuteness and how far Lucius went to protect his family. He must know that Narcissa's seer dreams are true if he acted so fast. Great work!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    I've been anxious to write the Malfoy version of events since Chapter 6 when I snuck Lucius in there!  I was also anxious to write a little Draco.  I've been having a good old time with little "Harry," so I was excited to write Draco.  I love the Malfoy family; they completely fascinate me.  Thank you for continuing to read and review!  Glad you liked this chapter.  The next one is a little more lighthearted.  Looking forward to hearing from you again! 

     ~ Raven Knight


Disclaimer Charm: Harry Potter and all related works including movie stills belong to J.K. Rowling, Scholastic, Warner Bros, and Bloomsbury. Used without permission. No copyright infringement is intended. No money is being made off of this site. All fanfiction and fanart are the property of the individual writers and artists represented on this site and do not represent the views and opinions of the Webmistress.

Powered by eFiction 3.5