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Title: Chapter 15 - News of Relations - Part I 21 Sep 2009 8:05 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmmm...Belladonna...Ever read LOTR? lol No, I liked her for what she was! ^-^ And poor little Tevin! All those people! Goodness, I wouldn't like that either! And Poor Sev, he caught that one didn't he? And Ah yes, Hagrid, poor guy's just too scary sometimes. lol and I know! I've tried Hagrid speak too and it is a pain the butt!

    Now, what will Dumbles do to try and mess everything up? And will the glorious Malfoys make another showing? -I hope so! How cute, little Tevin and little Draco! Ha! Their parents would go nuts! *grins evilly* Sounds like the beginning to another great story, eh? lol

    And I like that Ophelia doesn't want to be called "Mrs. Snape" and that Sev is all about not wanting her to be Tevin's 'new mom' So good job to you!

    ...hey look! I caught up! YAY!! Sorry for falling so disgracefully behind *blushes, hinds face* But thank goodness for sick days where I can read and tell people to bugger off and leave me alone! And it's a great excuse not to do homework! Everybody wins!! lol

    So, back to the point, great chapter. Can't wait for the next! :P

    Author's Response: Ha!  Yes, I have read LotR, several times actually, and I came up with Belladonna, not from that masterpiece, but from a name book that I flipped to a random page and pointed to a name.  (I usually name minor characters like that, but the somewhat more important ones are usually named by the meaning of their names.)  Hagrid really is a pain to write, but hey, all part of the gig, right?  We'll see about the meddling Dumbledore and the glorious Malfoys soon, but rest assured that they both/all make another appearance.  It is also important to the plot that Ophelia does not want to be called "Mrs. Snape," and that Severus does not want Tevin to call her, "Mom," but some suspicions and complications may arise from it.  *cue dramatic music*  I'm ecstatic that you caught up, but not about you being sick to do so.  Poor dear.  *Passes Pepper-Up Potion*  The next should be up as soon as I finish editting the thing.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Three in one day!  Agh!  Makes me happy! 
Title: Chapter 15 - News of Relations - Part I 15 Sep 2009 9:07 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    aw poor Tevin getting passed around like that and then getting sick :(
    I wonder if Sev is going to get a scolding from Ophelia and then Tevin glaring more at her :D he is too cute

    Author's Response:

    Hello, again!  Thank you for another review!  Tevin still doesn't exactly trust Ophelia yet, so she has some brownie points to earn with him yet.  Some interesting introductions are coming up in the next few chapters.  Hope to hear from you again!  Thanks for reading! 

Title: Chapter 15 - News of Relations - Part I 13 Sep 2009 3:32 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor little Tevin. I guess being passed to someone so large, must have been terrifying for the little boy. All the students' jaws must have dropped, when the greasy bat of the dungeon was so "fatherly" and tender with the little boy. Too sweet.

    Lovely chapter as usual Raven. I can't wait to see more of "Daddy Snape"!

    Oh...will we get to see Harry grow up, and go to Hogwarts. That would be really interesting.

    Can't wait for the next chappie.

    Oh, and don't worry about writing Hagrid. You did very well, and yes....he is difficult to write. I had to do it recently, and I don't think I did half as good a job, as you did.

    Author's Response:

    Hello, Pandora!  Thanks for reviewing once again... (I love your story, by the way!)  Harry will grow up quite a bit throughout this story, but not to the point that he attends Hogwarts.  He will be all over the school but not as a student.  (There's a plan...a masterplan...*evil laugh*)  Next chapter is on the way as soon as I have more than a half hour of free time...Thanks for reading/reviewing.  (And I'm so glad that Hagrid came out okay...he's a tough cookie to handle, especially with his speaking!)

Title: Chapter 15 - News of Relations - Part I 13 Sep 2009 8:19 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay, what a great chapter to be dedicated to! I really loved the reactions of all the female staff to Tevin, lol. Poor Tevin seems to be allergic to Professor Sprout. I loved how the poor little guy got passed around and fawned over, too cute. I'm sure he'll get used to all of those new faces sooner or later. I just hope that Harry doesn't give the plan away by calling Ophelia something odd that you wouldn't call your mother. I'm very curious about what he will call her and how he'll feel about her in the next few weeks.

    Great job! I can't wait to read more!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Ooh!  Yay!  Hello, again!  Thanks for another review!  #squeals*  Yes, sooner or later, he will grow used to everyone in Hogwarts.  I already have a plan for what he'd call Ophelia that will hopefully not be too odd.  Tevin is obviously attached to Severus, but once he's left with Ophelia for a while it'll be time for them to work on their relationship.  More is coming hopefully soon.  Thanks for sticking with it!  You're awesome! 

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