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Reviews For Sacrifices
Aw, poor Remus, and especially his mum and dad. I feel so bad, especially for his father; carrying around that guilt with him. That's so so sad. As usual though, Tevin brightens up everyone's day! Great chappie Raven. I hope that things get better for Remus though. It can't be easy to lose your brother, espcially your "twin" brother. Author's Response: HA! We all need some chocolate every once in a while. I was trying to convey the guilt of Remus's father in this chapter. If in canon Snape can have years and years of guilt, then he cannot possibly be the only one! Then that led me to stumbling onto some information on Remus, which then inspired this chapter mostly. But elements of this chapter will return eventually in the story. Remus will not be in the next few chapters. He'll be mourning, but once he comes back, things shouls be brighter for him. I can only torture these characters for so long. Thanks for the review, again! You are awesome!
Author's Response: Yes, Severus's and Tevin's escape to Remus for comfort, turned into arriving to try to comfort him. He needs some comfort, rather than being the one to always give it. When I first read in the books that Remus carries around chocolate, I laughed! I mean, here he is, a werewolf with a monthly cycle, who feels better when he eats chocolate! I thought this should sound familiar to all women! Personally, I think the monthly-pain-experiencing, chocolate-eating werewolf was JKR's stab at humor...*giggle* But I thought that there had to be more of a reason to his chocolate addiction than simply soothing muscle cramps and spasms. It all goes back to Lily. Every time. Thanks for the review yet again! Hope to hear from you again!
I LOVE the story of Romulus and Remus!...and not just because of Star Trek either. lol And I liked the names. Good for you!! Poor Lupin family... At first, I was like, whoa! Remus had a brother?!?!? I don't remember that! But thankgoodness for notes, because I was getting a little confused. lol (I really need to take more Tylenol lol)No, but this was so sad, but I think it might actually somehow help Remus later...maybe. And yay for Sev and Tevin coming in to make Remus feel better! Good ol' Lily and her chocolate! lol Good thing Sev remembered that little piece of information. ;) Lovely, as usual. I'm off to take more medicine and then study my butt off for geography! But I can't wait for the next chapter! Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Ivy-Green! Yeah, I knew this moment was coming for Remus, and knew that he needed to have his fun time before I thrw another hardship his way. And also, he will not be in the next chapter or two because he'll be mourning. Yes, he has lost a lot of people in only a little over a month. I didn't mean to confuse you (but I hope that your confusion means that I did a convincing job of the Lupin family? *hopeful eyes*)...and all of this grief may in the end help out Remus. Yes, everyone needs a little help to feel better, including Remus, even if it means a friend giving him some chocolate. I'm excited for your views on the next chapter. |
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