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Title: Chapter 17 - A Meeting of Destiny 13 Nov 2009 12:48 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Draco and Harry, who would have thought! This could be very interesting. Liked that Draco was the first to ask about being friends, that makes me think that he really doesn't have any......dinner should be interesting. I don't like the way Ophelia was ignored! Bad Lucias and Cissa.

    Author's Response: Draco has friends already.  Unfortunately, they're Crabbe and Goyle.  Not the most fun nor intelligent playmates, right?  Dinner will indeed be interesting.  Yes, the Malfoys ignored Ophelia, but after all she is a Muggleborn and not worth their attention or politeness in their opinion. Glad to get another review from you!  Thank you for reading!  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 17 - A Meeting of Destiny 14 Oct 2009 7:28 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    "Severus always gets practical items, and it makes him adorable."-"When he opened it and saw an Endless-Ink Eagle Feather Quill Pen, Severus cried on Christmas, because for the first time someone gave him something he'd actually wanted rather than needed."-
    '"Daddy! Toc'late! Toc'late! Fer Waymus!"'...HOLY CRAP!!! This was your cutest chapter yet! XD *squeals* There were so many adorable moments I had to stop myself from quoting you! XD Aww! That's just so cute! I love it, I love it, I LOVE IT!! XD

    Ahem, sorry about that *fixes hair* But seriously, I was awwing and ooing my way through all of this! And I just have to say that I loved Lucius in this chapter. Very good! So cute! You get fifty points for this one, Raven!!! XD

    Author's Response: Yay!  Thanks for reviewing!  Glad all the cuteness came across.  I tried to make this section cute with all of the not-so-cute things going on previously, so whoot!  Guess I succeeded a bit.  I seriously just LOVE writing Lucius.  He's so much fun to write.  I don't know why, but he is!  Thanks for the House Points!  I'll catch up on your story as soon as possible!  Don't worry!  I like your story muchly!  Thanks for continuing with mine!  (And once it doesn't hurt to laugh anymore I will continue reading your cute, funny one.)  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 17 - A Meeting of Destiny 12 Oct 2009 6:37 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice chapter--I can't wait to read about the dinner between the Malfoy's and Snape's. I wonder if Tevin and Draco will actually get along, or if things will go south because of foul attitudes.

    Take your time updating--it's always terrible to be going through health problems. I hope you recover soon.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: The dinner chapter is coming soon, so we'll see how Draco and Tevin will get along soon.  Thanks for reviewing!  Makes me very excited.  I am slowly recovering, so thanks for the well-wishes there.  *smile*  The next chapter is started so it might be a little bit until it's up.  THanks for staying with my story!  Love your reviews!  - RK
Title: Chapter 17 - A Meeting of Destiny 12 Oct 2009 8:33 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like that tevin and draco met, and love how snape is with his son. take care of yourself!

    Author's Response: Yes, having those two little tykes meet was in the plan all along.  Glad you are liking how Snape is with Tevin, too.  It's a challenge to write a paternal Severus sometimes, but I'm glad he's coming across okay.  Thanks for the review; they make me happy.  I'll try to be quicker on the updating pace.  THanks for sticking with this! - RK
Title: Chapter 17 - A Meeting of Destiny 12 Oct 2009 5:23 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor you. I hope that you are feeling better, and that your health continues to improve. You wrote a very lovely chapter though, even if you are feeling under the weather.

    I'm very curious to know how this friendship between Draco and Harry is going to work out. Very interesting indeed.

    Author's Response: Thank you for the complimentary review on my new chapter!  *giddy*  (And the well wishes.  I really appreciate it!)  Yes, it might be a very interesting friendship between the juniors Malfoys and Snapes.  Look out!  Thanks for reviewing and reading.  Sorry for the massive update delay.  Will try better now that I am slowly on the mend.  - RK
Title: Chapter 17 - A Meeting of Destiny 11 Oct 2009 10:18 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved Tevin's Christmas shopping :D can't wait to see Severus's expression!
    Poor Ophelia :( Stupid Malfoy! XD
    Also I don't know whether to be extremely worried or deathly worried about this dinner meeting later on T_T

    I know what you mean about school work it seems everyone is extremely busy since at my school it's been midterm week.
    I hope your tests show negative and that the doctors will give you a clean bill of health!

    Author's Response: Yay!  Review 100!  I was so excited!  Thanks for leaving a review again!  Glad you enjoyed shopping at Hogsmeade, even with the Malfoys slighting Ophelia.  The dinner meeting will be interesting for sure, but hopefully not to cause deathly worry.  Thanks again for reading.  It makes me want to continue a little faster.  Thanks also for your well wishes.  I'm slowly recovering now, so hopefully after catching up a little more on coursework, the writing pace will pick up again.  Hope to hear from you again with the next chapter. - RK
Title: Chapter 17 - A Meeting of Destiny 11 Oct 2009 9:56 pm
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    so glad to see an update and i hope you are feeling better. i really enjoy this story; you are doing a wonderful job.

    Author's Response: Oh thank you.  I am making a slow recovery, but things will improve slowly but surely.  Thanks for reading the story, it takes me a while but I do enjoy writing it.  I have to find some passages in the books so that I can write some more things, but soon enough hopefully things will be going well again in terms of this story, once I have caught up with all of my coursework from missing classes, etc.  Thank you for the review!  I'm writing as much as I can when I am feeling better and need to break from work and such.  Hope to hear from you again!  - RK

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