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Title: Chapter 18 - Tense Discussions 13 Nov 2009 1:08 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, that went as I expected....I want to just slap Lucias face.....Cissa I think in trying because she knows she will need Severus' good will at a later time, but I also believe she is not as cold or cruel as her husband. Great work.

    Author's Response: Leave it to Lucius - always has a good blood-heritage jab ready.  Narcissa is trying and for the very reason you mentioned.  Yay!  And you are correct, she is more compassionate than Lucius.  (I love writing the Malfoys.  That whole family fascinates me!  Lucius is actually up there on my Favorite Characters of Harry Potter list.)  There will be much more of the Malfoys in this story.  Thank you for another review!  This is making my miserable day so much better! ~ RK
Title: Chapter 18 - Tense Discussions 15 Oct 2009 6:42 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no!!!

    I can't believe that Lucius actually said that about Ophelia. Well...yes, I suppose I can.

    Great chappie, please update soon. I'm dying to know what happened.

    Author's Response: Oh yes!!! Believe it!  A good verbal jab is always ready in the Lucius Malfoy arsenal!  Thanks for leaving a review!  Hopefully, I'll have the next chapter up soon.  I'm on a roll right now.  The creative juices are going!  Thanks!  Keep reading!  And more will arrive shortly, I promise.  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 18 - Tense Discussions 15 Oct 2009 6:42 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG, I sincerely hope she was not dumb enough to abandon them. If not Arabella's, then where would she go? I'm very curious about this.

    I enjoyed the dinner scene too--at first, I thought Lucius was just joking with the mudblood comment to get the women out of the room, but he was serious! Yikes.

    Good work!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Hi, Ponytail Goddess!  Thanks for reading and leaving another splendid, makes-me-so-happy review!  Ophelia knows what would happen if she broke her Unbreakable Vow, she just needed to get away from the situation for a minute or two.  But her reasons are coming next chapter.  Yeah, Lucius may have blurted out an inner thought there that had been bugginng him, but he did ask it in complete seriousness.  Even Lucius isn't all that subtle, and will throw out cutting remarks to hurt people.  Thanks for the review!  Made my morning when I found it!  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 18 - Tense Discussions 15 Oct 2009 6:31 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    o.o uh-oh...Ophelia where art thou! >_> couldn't help myself.

    I think it was a very good chapter but I think Ophelia needed to chill a bit but then she was looked down on ever since she was little so I can't really blame her for going off like that. But then there is Lucius he's still an arse he will accept Severus and Tevin but not Ophelia though I wonder why is it he will let Tevin into his home if Tevin is a half-blood, does it have to do with his 'friendship' with Severus or Draco's new found friendship hm...lol so many questions and so little time

    :D good luck on your coursework! i have to get back to mine too lol midterms grr!!

    Author's Response:

    Yay!  Hello, again!  Thanks for leaving yet another review!  Everyone reaches their breaking points, and the reason why Ophelia goes off on Narcissa is in the next chapter.  Lucius is a complicated fellow, isn't he?  His reasoning might make an appearance in the next chapter.  If not, then definitiely the one after that!  Be patient.  The answers are coming.  Good luck on your midterms.  Eugh!  I feel the pain!  Thanks for reading as usual!  You're awesome and always manage to keep me on my toes!  ~ RK

Title: Chapter 18 - Tense Discussions 15 Oct 2009 6:18 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    "Lucius scoffed into the brandy that he was now swirling in the glass. "What kind of person do you think I am, Severus?" He sighed. "I may be hard and somewhat...cruel at times, I suppose, but I would not wish to harm my son, or yours for that matter. There are limits to everything.""- okay, Lucius is a big JERK! He even admits to it!...and yet I still love him in this XD There's just something about him...

    Poor Ophelia! Lucius wasn't to subtle there, was he? But I wonder why Ophelia got so offended with Narcissa? And Poor Draco and Harry! They just wanted to play! They were so cute in this! But Opheila better get over her fit or she's gunna be in BIG trouble!

    This, in an odd way, made me really happy! Another wonderful chappie Raven! ^-^

    Author's Response: Hi, Ivy!  When I profess that I am fascinated by the Malfoys, I do include their bad qualities too.  (But, let's be serious...What a fun trio to write!  I LOVE writing the three of them!)  No, Lucius wasn't very subtle was he, but when the man wants to wound with words, he manages to pick something nice and sharp to do the job.  Next chapter will hopefully explain why Ophelia got so offended.  And yes, if she doesn't get over it...she will be in big trouble...Death!  Thanks to that Unbreakable Vow, eh?  Glad you thought Draco and Harry were cute, and yes all they wanted to do was play (wouldn't you if you only had other adults or only Crabbe and Goyle's kids?  Yikes!)  Hopefully, I'll write more in the next few days, but no promises.  Time to catch up with yours! Thanks for reading and reviewing again!  Whoo!  Makes me smile! ~ RK

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