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Reviews For Sacrifices
Anyway, great chappie as usual, and I loved Severus telling Lucius off !!! Yay Sevvie! Author's Response: That's okay. It happens to all of us. Severus had to basically lay down his conditions to Lucius, or their friendship/interactions would be going nowhere, now would it? Although it might take quite a bit of effort for the Malfoys. Thanks for reading! ~ RK
-P.G. Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yes, in this case, it is better late than never. Glad to see you're still reading! YAY! ~ RK
I'm really enjoying your story--I just found it. Looking forward to your next update! V. Author's Response: Hello, Mervoparkite! Sorry the flashback was hard to follow. Glad you are enjoying my story so far, and I'm looking forward to another review! Thanks for the review! THey make me happy! ~ RK
"She saw him try to muster up an encouraging smile but it came out as a look of pain."- Aww! He's adorably made of fail!! :( Poor guy! I felt so bad through out this whole chapter. Sev's not a coward! He's not!! No one messes with my Snape!!...I mean, Rowling's Snape...Raven's Snape? Screw it, no one mess with Snape! (there's the right one) And I totally love the ending. I can just see Lucius all like "WFT?!?" Ha! I crack myself up. OH! And I TOTALLY imagined Alan Rickman's voice to Snape's lines throughout the chapter and it was TOTALLY the more amazing thing ever! ;3 Alan rocks! So, you wanted spelling mistakes, I found a few:"She noticed that Severus was sitting stiffly in the overly maroon and gold room, and she leaned hr head" you forgot the "e" in "her" (like my "o" in "to" ^-^ "Lemon. I ‘m not that picky."- get that nasty extra space outta there! And he's SUCH a little Dumbles, with his lemons! *rolls eyes*"and settled them at his neck with heer fingers clasped at his nape..."- take out an "e" in "heer" please! Well, that's all I came up with...so again, wonderful chappie and I can't wait for more! Poor Sev... Author's Response: Thanks for pointing out some of my mistakes. It helps! No, Severus isn't a coward, but when he does certain things people see it as cowardice. And I really, really wanted to try to show that James thinks of him as a coward, just because in canon Snape gets livid when Harry calls him that, too. Glad you liked Lucius at the end. Yeah, imagine that surprise...So, you hear Alan Rickman's voice in my dialogue? YES! That makes me so excited! And I agree, he does rock! Yeah, and with the lemon...Had to make James an almost Dumbledore clone! I couldn't resist. And I just don't picture James as one to simply sit there sipping tea to calm himself down. He'd probably go flying or something, but if he had to drink tea, I am of the opinion that his tastes would not be so particular...Hence, the Dumbledore Lemon! Thanks for reading and for the review! More is coming soon... ~ RK |
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