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Title: Chapter 21 - Strengthened Bonds 15 Apr 2022 8:11 am
Reviewer: Wejee (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter is one of my favorites!! I love how you write Tevin and Draco at this age, they are adorable… and it makes sense that Tevin would be the more responsible of the two.
    Severus is such a good father ôvô (A far cry from his own father).
    I totally understand what Lucius has been through, when you see your child doing stupidly frightening things you become so afraid for them that it turns into anger…
Title: Chapter 21 - Strengthened Bonds 28 Mar 2010 7:20 am
Reviewer: Min (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good one.

    Author's Response: Thanks!  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 21 - Strengthened Bonds 13 Nov 2009 8:31 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Really like that chapter. Draco is a brat, but not as much as I would have expected. See Lucias really scared at the height the boys were flying put a human touch to him. In canon you come away with the impression that Draco is alive only because he needed an heir, not that he really could care or love the boy....you have given me something to think about. BTW, what are the ages of the boys in this chapter?

    Author's Response: The boys are five years old in this chapter.  Yeah, Draco's a brat but...he would be.  I wanted to try to flesh out Lucius more than in canon, because in the very last book I did get the impression that both Narcissa and Lucius care deeply for their son (otherwise why would Narcissa lie to Voldemort, practically beg Severus to help her son, and why would the both of them not even bother fighting in the final battle and only concentrate on finding Draco otherwise?) and that they would exhibit more worried, concerned, yet stern qualities of three dimensional parents as opposed to just keeping their bloodline alive.  Thanks for reading!  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 21 - Strengthened Bonds 11 Nov 2009 7:03 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw poor Tevin he just wanted to have some fun but Draco had to be a bit spoiled there and say he said a spell under his breath. I guess it'll happens. Also I'm glad Minnie bit Lucius he needed to wake up lol! Also I hope no one else notices Tevin say Fay instead of mom/my!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, it's Draco's way of ending the game but still winning, even if it is a total lie!  Glad you liked Minnie biting Lucius.  And Tevin was talking with Severus here when he called Ophelia "Fay" instead of "mom(my)."  That should be explained in the next chapter.  Hope it won't disappoint.  Thanks for your review! ~ RK

Title: Chapter 21 - Strengthened Bonds 10 Nov 2009 3:30 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter--I loved the conflict between Harry and Draco over the broom. It was just like Harry to jump in head first and become endangered while trying to solve a problem.

    Kudos to Lucius for saying thank you to Ophelia! I'm excited that he might break out of his old beliefs (possibly...I still need a little more convincing, I think).

    Great chapter!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I figured Draco would be the bossy brat, while Tevin/Harry is too worried about making an adult angry.  But he still has that Gryffindor quality of charging right into danger.  Yes, he may have said, "Thank you," but will the politeness last?  We'll see.  Thanks for another review! ~ RK
Title: Chapter 21 - Strengthened Bonds 10 Nov 2009 4:57 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, I'm so glad that Lucius apologized to Severus for scaring Tevin.

    I thought that Severus handled Tevin very well too.

    Nice chappie. I'm very tired from bowling, otherwise I'd write a longer review, but just know that I'm still very much enjoying this lovely story.

    Author's Response: Thanks!  Lucius was just a bit too freaked out for the boys' safety, but he knows that they may have seen it as overreacting.  Glad you like Severus and Tevin's interaction too.  It's perfectly alright that you didn't leave a long review.  We all get tired and just can't do it.  (I'm actually going bowling at the end of this week!  It should be fun!)  Glad you like the story.  (You're review #123!  How cool is that!?)  Hope to hear from you again!  Don't wear yourself out with the bowling.  *grin*   ~ RK 
Title: Chapter 21 - Strengthened Bonds 09 Nov 2009 9:30 am
Reviewer: Rosa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice chapter! It's good to see the boys having fun, thought that was indeed very dangerous, Lucius was right to get that angry at them. Thanks for the update, looking forward to the next.

    Author's Response: Thank you, Rosa!  They need to learn how to have fun in a safe setting, don't they?  But, they're little brats (especially Draco) and will tend to get into trouble.  And I agree with you about Lucius.  I'll try to post again soon.  Thank you for reading the story and leaving a review!  Makes my day!  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 21 - Strengthened Bonds 09 Nov 2009 8:49 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG! That was so cute! When I first started reading, I was like, "how does a baby Draco know all these spells?" But now they're five and they're so cute!! XD And they play fight with wands and act it out! I love when little kids do that! They're always so adorable! But then Draco thought it would be a good idea to fly mommy's broom...that's NEVER a good idea Draco! He's such a little brat but I love him anyway! XD And poor little Tevin.

    I LOVED Lucius here. He's all growlly and mean but it's just because he was scared. That's totally believeable as far as I'm concerned. And Sev sounds like such a good dad! He and Tevin are so cute together! I just wanna hug them both! XD

    Very very good Raven! You perfectly ended a good day! So thanks for that and I can't wait for you next up date! *give a hug to Raven*

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, Ivy-Green!  I didn't want to flat out say "four years later," but have readers figure out they were five by dropping the hints around the chapter.  It's not usually my style to do time jumps clearly indicated.  And to be honest, I have no idea why!  (Does that make me mean?)  They have to act out what the spells do, since they can't actually jinx/hex each other.  And leave it to Draco to pull a stunt like that.  Little brat indeed.  I'm portraying Draco as the rebellious one in this friendship because he wants to see just how much he can get away with with Lucius and Narcissa, while Tevin is the well-behaved (for the most part) boy, because he doesn't like making Severus angry or disappointed.  Glad that you liked Lucius.  I was hoping he wasn't too...exaggerated, but when fear motivates you, you aren't really yourself anymore.  Yes, Severus has had a whole staff at Hogwarts and a few friends (*cough* Lily & James's memories, Ophelia, Remus, Mrs. Figg, the Malfoys) to help him too.  Lucky for him.  Glad I could end your good day well.  I'll catch up on your story as soon as I can!  It's been a rough week.  *hugs back* ~ RK

Title: Chapter 21 - Strengthened Bonds 09 Nov 2009 8:07 am
Reviewer: Min (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was very good. The broom scene was very well done. A very enjoyable read.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  The broom scene was planned a little differently before I started writing it, and then this happened.  So, despite it not going to plan, I'm glad it still works.  Thanks for your review!  Glad you are enjoying it!  ~ RK

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