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Reviews For Sacrifices
Severus is such a good father ôvô (A far cry from his own father). I totally understand what Lucius has been through, when you see your child doing stupidly frightening things you become so afraid for them that it turns into anger…
Author's Response: Thanks! ~ RK
Author's Response: The boys are five years old in this chapter. Yeah, Draco's a brat but...he would be. I wanted to try to flesh out Lucius more than in canon, because in the very last book I did get the impression that both Narcissa and Lucius care deeply for their son (otherwise why would Narcissa lie to Voldemort, practically beg Severus to help her son, and why would the both of them not even bother fighting in the final battle and only concentrate on finding Draco otherwise?) and that they would exhibit more worried, concerned, yet stern qualities of three dimensional parents as opposed to just keeping their bloodline alive. Thanks for reading! ~ RK
Author's Response: Yes, it's Draco's way of ending the game but still winning, even if it is a total lie! Glad you liked Minnie biting Lucius. And Tevin was talking with Severus here when he called Ophelia "Fay" instead of "mom(my)." That should be explained in the next chapter. Hope it won't disappoint. Thanks for your review! ~ RK
Kudos to Lucius for saying thank you to Ophelia! I'm excited that he might break out of his old beliefs (possibly...I still need a little more convincing, I think). Great chapter! -P.G. Author's Response: Thank you! I figured Draco would be the bossy brat, while Tevin/Harry is too worried about making an adult angry. But he still has that Gryffindor quality of charging right into danger. Yes, he may have said, "Thank you," but will the politeness last? We'll see. Thanks for another review! ~ RK
I thought that Severus handled Tevin very well too. Nice chappie. I'm very tired from bowling, otherwise I'd write a longer review, but just know that I'm still very much enjoying this lovely story. Author's Response: Thanks! Lucius was just a bit too freaked out for the boys' safety, but he knows that they may have seen it as overreacting. Glad you like Severus and Tevin's interaction too. It's perfectly alright that you didn't leave a long review. We all get tired and just can't do it. (I'm actually going bowling at the end of this week! It should be fun!) Glad you like the story. (You're review #123! How cool is that!?) Hope to hear from you again! Don't wear yourself out with the bowling. *grin* ~ RK
Author's Response: Thank you, Rosa! They need to learn how to have fun in a safe setting, don't they? But, they're little brats (especially Draco) and will tend to get into trouble. And I agree with you about Lucius. I'll try to post again soon. Thank you for reading the story and leaving a review! Makes my day! ~ RK
I LOVED Lucius here. He's all growlly and mean but it's just because he was scared. That's totally believeable as far as I'm concerned. And Sev sounds like such a good dad! He and Tevin are so cute together! I just wanna hug them both! XD Very very good Raven! You perfectly ended a good day! So thanks for that and I can't wait for you next up date! *give a hug to Raven* Author's Response: Thank you, Ivy-Green! I didn't want to flat out say "four years later," but have readers figure out they were five by dropping the hints around the chapter. It's not usually my style to do time jumps clearly indicated. And to be honest, I have no idea why! (Does that make me mean?) They have to act out what the spells do, since they can't actually jinx/hex each other. And leave it to Draco to pull a stunt like that. Little brat indeed. I'm portraying Draco as the rebellious one in this friendship because he wants to see just how much he can get away with with Lucius and Narcissa, while Tevin is the well-behaved (for the most part) boy, because he doesn't like making Severus angry or disappointed. Glad that you liked Lucius. I was hoping he wasn't too...exaggerated, but when fear motivates you, you aren't really yourself anymore. Yes, Severus has had a whole staff at Hogwarts and a few friends (*cough* Lily & James's memories, Ophelia, Remus, Mrs. Figg, the Malfoys) to help him too. Lucky for him. Glad I could end your good day well. I'll catch up on your story as soon as I can! It's been a rough week. *hugs back* ~ RK
Author's Response: Thank you! The broom scene was planned a little differently before I started writing it, and then this happened. So, despite it not going to plan, I'm glad it still works. Thanks for your review! Glad you are enjoying it! ~ RK |
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