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Reviews For Sacrifices
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad to hear from you again! More is coming, but it's a challenging chapter, so it will not be a fast update. Hope to hear from you again! Thanks for still reading! ~ RK
Author's Response: You're welcome! Wow! You caught up so quickly! Yes, we might not be seeing much moe of Bill Weasley, but his other relatives should be coming in sooner or later. Glad you liked Draco's first impressions of the Great Hall. And yes, poor Severus indeed. Halloween is nothing for him to celebrate. (Personally, I love Halloween!) Hope the next chapter does not disappoint. ~ RK
That part at the end was sweet too. At first, I thought Harry wouldn't understand because he's so young, so it was refreshing to have him guess correctly. Exactly how old are the boys now? It seems like you jumped through time and made them older, but I'm not sure how much. I've been picturing them as four or five year olds, but I was just curious as to how old you envision them. Very nice chapter--I can't wait for more! -P.G. Author's Response: Thank you! The boys might be hanging around in Hogwarts more in the story, so more students will make appearances - even some more familiar ones, not just Bill Weasley. I would usualy think that a young child wouldn't be able to understand, but I rather liked the idea of him being able to read his father easily. There are only a few things that make Severus upset and Tevin has filed that information in his head. His a smart little cookie! And Draco and Tevin are five years old. So that is correct! I thought I stated it somewhere in there, but if I didn't...oops! Hope the next chapter does not disaapoint. It's long. ~ RK
Though I'm sad Severus is sad and that Tevin is sad! T_T I can't wait for the next chapter! Also I wonder why Tevin said to Draco to get him to eat...hm... Author's Response: Yeah! Glad you liked my made up Slytherins! Halloween is tough for Severus, and Tevin doesn't like to see his father upset or angry. The next chapter is long and will take a while but it will be posted as soon as possible. As to what Tevin said to Draco, lt's just say that he's a persuasive little boy. *wink* Thanks for reviewing! ~ RK
Author's Response: Ah! Mystery solved then! It happens. It actually happened to me when I responded to someone's review once. It responded twice. Weird. It happens! ~ RK
Poor Severus. I think that he needs a kiss. Great chappie. I'm looking forward to the next chappie. Author's Response: Thank you! Severus does indeed need something - a hug, a kiss, something! Next chapter continues this one, so you might be thinking he needs even more of a hug then, but it will take me a while to write. Lots of things happen in that chapter and it's going to be long. I'll write as fast as I can. Hope it does not disappoint. Thanks for the review again! ~ RK
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it! ~ RK
I did find two little errors though: "It's not like one or your father's social parties" change "on" to "of" "That is it was until Professor Snape brought his son to live with him." this confused me. I think it's supposed to say, "That is until Prof..." Very very good Raven! I give you ten points for such a quick update! You're putting me to shame! Author's Response: I had to check twice to be sure I wasn't seeing something. You reviewed twice? Odd. Yes, Elvira is a little old for Draco. *giggle* Tevin has a good bond with Severus, and hates to upset his father or to see someone/something upset his father. Glad you liked it! Hope the next chapter does not disaapoint. It's a long one! ~ RK
I found two little mistakes though:"It's not like one or your father's social parties." -On should be "of" "That is it was until Professor Snape brought his son to live with him." this sentence confused me a bit. I think you need to look at it. I think it sound read, "That is until Prof. Snape..." Again, Very very good Raven! I can't wait for more! Oh, and ten points to you for such a quick update! *cheers* Author's Response: Thank you, Ivy-Green! Glad the sadness was balanced in the chapter. I was hoping it wouldn't be overly depressing. Lucius's cane always fascinated me - especially after watching interviews with Jason Isaacs about Lucius's cane. So, after that I needed to explain where the cane comes from. Minnie biting him was only a way to introduce this cane. I won't even hide that! Have to have a little Slytherin/Gryffindor tension. Yes, Draco and Tevin are good friends. There will be more interactions with them in the future. Yes, considering that Halloween was the day that Severus lost Lily, I do not think he would be in a festive mood. He does want his son to enjoy Halloween, though, and he tries. Thanks for finding those mistakes! I fixed them! Don't expect an update nearly at the speed of this one. The next chapter is a continuation of Chapter 22, and is really long. It will take me quite some time to complete. I'll write as fast as I can. ~ RK
Author's Response: Thank you! Updates are not normally this fast, so do not expect to be massively spoiled in the near future. *frowns* Besides the next chapter is very long and will take me a long time to write. Lots of things happen in that chapter, and is pretty much a continuation of Chapter 22. Glad you liked this chapter. Halloween is a sad day for Severus, but he wants his son to still find something good about Halloween. And yes, Draco was a little miffed about being wordlessly ordered to eat a good dinner before moving onto the sweets. Hope the next chapter does not disappoint! Thank you for your review! ~ RK |
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