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Title: Chapter 22 - The Halloween Feast 15 Nov 2009 11:04 pm
Reviewer: Tonks-is-cool (Signed) [Report This]
    Amazing story, wonderful ideas and writing. Thank you for this enjoyable read.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad to hear from you again!  More is coming, but it's a challenging chapter, so it will not be a fast update.  Hope to hear from you again!  Thanks for still reading!  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 22 - The Halloween Feast 13 Nov 2009 9:52 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful, bittersweet chapter. Liked that we even saw Bill, even if it wasn's so pleasant. I wish the Houses could get along!! Draco's reaction to the Great Hall was priceless. Poor Severus.......Halloween isn't my favorite holiday either, but not for that reason. Thanks you for a great chapter.

    Author's Response: You're welcome!  Wow!  You caught up so quickly!  Yes, we might not be seeing much moe of Bill Weasley, but his other relatives should be coming in sooner or later.  Glad you liked Draco's first impressions of the Great Hall.  And yes, poor Severus indeed.  Halloween is nothing for him to celebrate.  (Personally, I love Halloween!)  Hope the next chapter does not disappoint.  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 22 - The Halloween Feast 11 Nov 2009 3:28 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, that was cute. I loved the interaction between the boys and the other students. Will they make more appearances? I hope so :).

    That part at the end was sweet too. At first, I thought Harry wouldn't understand because he's so young, so it was refreshing to have him guess correctly.

    Exactly how old are the boys now? It seems like you jumped through time and made them older, but I'm not sure how much. I've been picturing them as four or five year olds, but I was just curious as to how old you envision them.

    Very nice chapter--I can't wait for more!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  The boys might be hanging around in Hogwarts more in the story, so more students will make appearances - even some more familiar ones, not just Bill Weasley.  I would usualy think that a young child wouldn't be able to understand, but I rather liked the idea of him being able to read his father easily.  There are only a few things that make Severus upset and Tevin has filed that information in his head.  His a smart little cookie!  And Draco and Tevin are five years old.  So that is correct!  I thought I stated it somewhere in there, but if I didn't...oops!  Hope the next chapter does not disaapoint.  It's long. ~ RK
Title: Chapter 22 - The Halloween Feast 11 Nov 2009 7:04 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the Slytherins! :D
    Though I'm sad Severus is sad and that Tevin is sad! T_T I can't wait for the next chapter!
    Also I wonder why Tevin said to Draco to get him to eat...hm...

    Author's Response:

    Yeah! Glad you liked my made up Slytherins!  Halloween is tough for Severus, and Tevin doesn't like to see his father upset or angry.  The next chapter is long and will take a while but it will be posted as soon as possible.  As to what Tevin said to Draco, lt's just say that he's a persuasive little boy.  *wink* Thanks for reviewing! ~ RK

Title: Chapter 22 - The Halloween Feast 11 Nov 2009 4:00 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey, it's me for like the third time, but I wanted to explain why you have two different reviews from me. You see, my compute said my first review didn't go through so I had to redo it...so you now have like three different reviews from me...SORRY!!!

    Author's Response: Ah!  Mystery solved then!  It happens.  It actually happened to me when I responded to someone's review once.  It responded twice.  Weird.  It happens! ~ RK
Title: Chapter 22 - The Halloween Feast 11 Nov 2009 2:33 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh that was so sad and sweet, but great . I loved it.

    Poor Severus. I think that he needs a kiss.

    Great chappie. I'm looking forward to the next chappie.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Severus does indeed need something - a hug, a kiss, something!  Next chapter continues this one, so you might be thinking he needs even more of a hug then, but it will take me a while to write.  Lots of things happen in that chapter and it's going to be long.  I'll write as fast as I can.  Hope it does not disappoint. Thanks for the review again!  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 22 - The Halloween Feast 11 Nov 2009 2:23 am
Reviewer: Min (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was good.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you liked it! ~ RK
Title: Chapter 22 - The Halloween Feast 11 Nov 2009 1:15 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww! So sad! This was really cute, but sad! It's Halloween and poor Sev's so depressed! But cute that Draco and Tevin are such good friends. And I liked the history of Lucius's cain! XD Nice. And the little duel that happened added some nice flavor, to remind everyone that Gryffindor and Slytherin still don't get along. And I LOVED the line when Sev told Draco that that one girl was too old for him XD I literally snorted there. But poor poor Sev! He's so sad and it makes little Tevin sad too. This was really good!!

    I did find two little errors though: "It's not like one or your father's social parties" change "on" to "of"
    "That is it was until Professor Snape brought his son to live with him." this confused me. I think it's supposed to say, "That is until Prof..."

    Very very good Raven! I give you ten points for such a quick update! You're putting me to shame!

    Author's Response: I had to check twice to be sure I wasn't seeing something.  You reviewed twice?  Odd.  Yes, Elvira is a little old for Draco.  *giggle*  Tevin has a good bond with Severus, and hates to upset his father or to see someone/something upset his father.  Glad you liked it!  Hope the next chapter does not disaapoint.  It's a long one!  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 22 - The Halloween Feast 11 Nov 2009 1:07 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh! That was so sad! Funny in parts, but sad! Poor Sev! My heart's breaking! Oh, this was very good Raven! I really liked the history of Lucius's cain, and the little duel. And when Severus told Draco that that one girl was too old for him. XD That was really funny. Oh, and I thought it was cute that Draco and Tevin are such good friends now. But how sad that Sev's all depressed on Halloweens...very sad. But little Tevin's so cute and understanding! I just want to hug them both!

    I found two little mistakes though:"It's not like one or your father's social parties." -On should be "of"
    "That is it was until Professor Snape brought his son to live with him." this sentence confused me a bit. I think you need to look at it. I think it sound read, "That is until Prof. Snape..."

    Again, Very very good Raven! I can't wait for more! Oh, and ten points to you for such a quick update! *cheers*

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, Ivy-Green!  Glad the sadness was balanced in the chapter.  I was hoping it wouldn't be overly depressing.  Lucius's cane always fascinated me - especially after watching interviews with Jason Isaacs about Lucius's cane.  So, after that I needed to explain where the cane comes from.  Minnie biting him was only a way to introduce this cane.  I won't even hide that!  Have to have a little Slytherin/Gryffindor tension.  Yes, Draco and Tevin are good friends.  There will be more interactions with them in the future. 

    Yes, considering that Halloween was the day that Severus lost Lily, I do not think he would be in a festive mood.  He does want his son to enjoy Halloween, though, and he tries. 

    Thanks for finding those mistakes!  I fixed them!  Don't expect an update nearly at the speed of this one.  The next chapter is a continuation of Chapter 22, and is really long.  It will take me quite some time to complete.  I'll write as fast as I can. ~ RK

Title: Chapter 22 - The Halloween Feast 10 Nov 2009 8:50 pm
Reviewer: Rosa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So good to have an update so soon. Lovely chapter, a little sad but it was perfect. I could imagine Draco's face as he realize he has to eat his dinner first lol Thanks! Looking forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Updates are not normally this fast, so do not expect to be massively spoiled in the near future.  *frowns*  Besides the next chapter is very long and will take me a long time to write.  Lots of things happen in that chapter, and is pretty much a continuation of Chapter 22.  Glad you liked this chapter.  Halloween is a sad day for Severus, but he wants his son to still find something good about Halloween.  And yes, Draco was a little miffed about being wordlessly ordered to eat a good dinner before moving onto the sweets.  Hope the next chapter does not disappoint!  Thank you for your review! ~ RK

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