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Title: Chapter 25 - Halloween Secrets - Part III 11 Aug 2010 9:52 pm
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    in a previous chapter you had Sirius say that when he wnt to Godric's Hollow that he was the one who had o close James' eyes, but in this capter you have Severus doing it~ (Severus reached out to close James's dead eyes). just thought id point it out, if it was a mistake.

    Author's Response: Wow!  Thank you so much for pointing that out.  It was indeed a mistake.  There's so much to keep track of that I miss some things.  Thank you.  I fixed it.  I got rid of Sirius doing that, and kept it as Severus.  Thank you for your review!  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 25 - Halloween Secrets - Part III 01 Apr 2010 5:04 am
Reviewer: D. Kelley (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yep, still interested - hope there's more! Thanks! :)

    Author's Response:

    There is more for sure.  I just have to write it...which is difficult with real life interfering as it always tends to do.  I'm so happy people are still interested in my story!  Hope to hear from you again!  ~ RK

Title: Chapter 25 - Halloween Secrets - Part III 31 Mar 2010 5:35 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for the update--no matter how long it took, I truely enjoyed the chapter.
    V.

    Author's Response:

    You are welcome!  I'm pleased you enjoyed it!  As soon as real life lets me breathe a bit, I'll get back to writing some more.  The delay no matter what should not be as bad as this last one!  Thanks for still reading, and for reviewing!  ~ RK

Title: Chapter 25 - Halloween Secrets - Part III 30 Mar 2010 1:39 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow I haven't read this since chapter 14. I have been busy. Once I started reading it again I couldn't stop. I love this story. Wow what an interesting Halloween. I hope Severus and Tevin have a long talk. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response: I'll update when I get the chance to write...Real life is viciously keeping me busier than I ever expected it to right now.  Glad you got caught up and that you like my story!  I got all warm and mushy at that!  That made my day!  Severus and Tevin do indeed need a long talk about this whole thing, don't they?  Thank you for another review!  Hope to hear mroe from you!  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 25 - Halloween Secrets - Part III 27 Mar 2010 11:59 pm
Reviewer: slashygoodnessgmail.com (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm enjoying this story very much and I'm glady you keep writing. I just have a fe questions. I might have missed it but I can't figure out how old Tevin is. He started out 15 months but he is obviously older than that now. Also, why does Remus have the Maurader's Map? Keep writing :)

    Author's Response: To answer your questions.  I was pretty sure I mentioned a few chapters back that Tevin is now about 5 or 6 years old.  I had a time jump in there just to move the story along.  If you are confused as to why the Marauder's Map is not in Filch's possession yet, that answer won't happen for a while yet.  Thank you for reading and reviewing!  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 25 - Halloween Secrets - Part III 27 Mar 2010 9:29 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope that Severus will be okay. Obviously, he is ill and needs care.

    It would be better for Severus to share his thoughts and feelings about Lily, so that he can let it go, even if it is difficult for him. What happened, happened and cannot be changed, so he needs to move on and allow himself to enjoy life, even Halloween, once again.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: I'm sure Severus will pull through.  Yes, he needs to let things go, but keep in mind that even in canon the guilt he feels for somewhat causing her death haunts him up until his death.  It's not in his nature to forget.  There will be some other events that will definitely distract him from his guilt though.  Thank you for your review!!  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 25 - Halloween Secrets - Part III 27 Mar 2010 8:28 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Of course she'd give it to Harry; too bad Sev didn't think of that. At least he got the consolation of knowing he saved his own son though. Do we get to see some of these memories in the near future? I hope so. Great update--I had forgotten how much I liked this fic.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: I'm not sure if I'll be revealing all of those memories she gave him in that scene yet or not.  I have a lot more events to cover in the story that I want to keep it moving.  But if a flashback becomes necessary, then possibly.  Glad you kept reading - and still like it!  Thanks for your review!  I get excited when I get one every time!  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 25 - Halloween Secrets - Part III 27 Mar 2010 9:33 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yes, people are still interested. This was a great chapter, I'm glad Opelia is starting to "become mom". Sev will be upset when he gets back that Tevin left. Great chapter, please post soon.

    Author's Response: Glad people are still interested in my story!  Yes, she is warming up to the idea of Mom.  We'll see the reactions of everyone next chapter.  It should be more lighthearted than this last three-parter chapter.  As soon as I find time to write, updates will follow.  Be patient.  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 25 - Halloween Secrets - Part III 27 Mar 2010 4:19 am
Reviewer: Rosa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So glad to find an update for this story. Thanks! It's nice to Tevin and Ophelia are getting close. Hope to see another update soon.

    Author's Response: You are welcome for the update!  Tevin and Ophelia are finally growing closer, yes.  They will be interacting a little more soon.  I'll update as soon as I find time to write again.  Thank you for the review!  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 25 - Halloween Secrets - Part III 27 Mar 2010 2:15 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Raven, what a wonderful surprise to find that you'd updated. How could you even ask if anyone is still interested in this lovely story.

    You are a really talented writer, and I get so caught up in the story. I wanted to cry right along with Severus, when Lily died. As a matter of fact, my eyes are tearing right now.

    Aw, little Tevin is such an imp, a cute imp, but an imp nevertheless.

    I can't wait for the next chappie.

    Author's Response: Glad you are still reading!  Thanks for your compliments on my writing.  I was hoping I did the death of Lily justice, because the events surrounding that Halloween night took forever to plan out and map out.  This was a nightmare of a chapter to write.  Glad you like little Tevin.  He's a little devil.  I can't wait to find the time to write the next chapter, nevermind to post it.  Be patient.  Thanks again!  ~ RK

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