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Title: Chapter 26 - Consequence of Persuasion 31 May 2010 5:21 pm
Reviewer: Solarfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I haven't found any really good child fics in a while. I've read just about every one that is on this site. I like the way your story is going. Can't wait to see what the boys' punishments are. I like how you make your own spells and explain them even if they aren't your own. I got tired of authors writing about spells as if everyone knows Latin.

    Update soon.

    Author's Response: Well, thank you.  I don't even know Latin, just struggling to cross reference and ask people for translation help.  So, I feel it is very necessary to explain my spells that I come up with, especially ones that need the translation for plot purposes.  Glad you find them useful.  Thanks for reading and also for reviewing!  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 26 - Consequence of Persuasion 31 May 2010 7:50 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope things get better in RL for you!
    I enjoyed the parts about Tonks and Charlie :D
    The parts with Draco and Tevin not so much because Draco was being a prat and Tevin going with it, *sigh* all the warring bells going off saying SOMETHING WRONG IS GOING TO HAPPEN again lol!
    Poor Severus he's going to get premature gray hairs :D

    Author's Response: I hope they do too.  It has been miserable.  I enjoyed writing Tonks and Charlie!  They'll be back.  And yes, well, Draco is a little trouble maker.  Thank you for reading still and reviewing.  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 26 - Consequence of Persuasion 29 May 2010 3:46 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha, that ending was kind of funny when Tonks ran into the Potion Professor's bedroom and then into the livingroom and Lupin appeared. Kind of ironic as well since in the future they get married. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you.  I wanted to explore the relatinship of Tonks and Remus - try to give them a little backstory or origins type of thing.  It really bothers me that in canon that relationship springs up out of nowhere!  Thank you for your review!  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 26 - Consequence of Persuasion 27 May 2010 7:20 pm
Reviewer: gin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    poor harry.i agree with Narcissa.why they left harry alone?i hope snape doesnt break harry' heaart.

    Author's Response: Thanks for your review!  Yes, Narcissa was right.  We'll see the punishment next chapter.  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 26 - Consequence of Persuasion 27 May 2010 8:44 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So glad you posted, but what a place to end. Please post next chapter soon! Draco is always getting tevin in trouble, Great chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, he is.  Draco's a little brat, isn't he?  Thank you for reviewing!  ~ RK

Title: Chapter 26 - Consequence of Persuasion 27 May 2010 5:29 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG!! Raven, this is intense!! How could you leave it like that?!? (It's a good cliffie though, one that I might have done ;P) But my goodness!! What a wonderful chapter! Poor little Draco and Tevin! Why does Draco always bring trouble? You'd think his fahter would put the fear of God into him. But what's Snape going to do? And Remus! How are Remus and Tonks going to get on? And I have so many questions!! You'll need to update as soon as you can! This is going to drive me mad! Wonderful update Raven!! :D

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  Draco brings trouble because he's an arrogant little brat!  I'll try to update soon.  I'm glad you're still reading! - RK


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