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Title: Chapter 12 - Reassurances 27 Aug 2009 3:29 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    That ending line really gets to me. I like that your story is unique in that he doesn't have Lily's eyes, but the fact that Severus wanted him to really upsets me. The spell you chose for it was perfect "You wear the eyes of your father"-very nice.

    Sad, but not every chapter can be happy. Nice work!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  Things might lose its gloom soon, but no promises there.  *evil grin*  I'm so excited you liked the spell!  (That was a pain trying to think of good wording for that, let me tell you!)  I thought that Severus would want to hold onto anything of Lily, and since Harry's eyes are so important to him in canon (not to mention so recognizable to pretty much everyone) I figured that he would want his son to keep her eyes.  But once again, Remus has to be the voice of reason, which he will continue to do.  He'll have a happy carefree moment soon, actually.  Thanks for the review!  So excited and happy you are still reading! 
Title: Chapter 12 - Reassurances 27 Aug 2009 1:48 pm
Reviewer: petuniac3 (Signed) [Report This]
    very nice

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad your are still reading! 
Title: Chapter 11 - Reminder of a Promise 25 Aug 2009 7:41 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, that was so sweet. Harry/Tevin was angry with Ophelia for making Severus sad.

    I'm so glad that she's changed her mind, and that they can be a family now.

    Nice chapter. Interested to see what happens next.

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review!  Yes, Tevin is showing a bit of protective temper, but don't mess with him and his Daddy!  Glad you're glad she changed her mind.  I'll hopefully update soon...Next few chapters are busy...
Title: Chapter 11 - Reminder of a Promise 25 Aug 2009 6:25 am
Reviewer: She Who Must Be Obeyed (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, crying like a girl now. I hope you're happy with yourself! Fantastic chapter. I love this story and can't wait to read more, even if I do end up all weepy. :-)

    Author's Response: Sorry (but secretly loving it!) that you cried...Thank you!  I'm glad you like the story so far.  Things will get a little involved and busy in the next few chapters before...thre new characters come in (who also stay for quite a while)!  I am trying to get there as fast as possible...Thank you for reviewing and reading!  *offers pumpkin juice*
Title: Chapter 11 - Reminder of a Promise 25 Aug 2009 5:26 am
Reviewer: Rosa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What a great chapter! I cried when Severus was packing. I'm so glad she accepted. It doesn't have to be for long, I mean they can stage a separation after a while. Thanks for the update, looking forward to the next.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm torn between beingn glad you cried and feeling bad for making you cry.  Guess the emotion got through, then!  (Yes!)  I'll try to post soon.  Things will get complicated in the next few chapters.  Thanks for the review! 
Title: Chapter 11 - Reminder of a Promise 25 Aug 2009 5:20 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Cool!

    Author's Response: Thanks!  Glad you approve. 
Title: Chapter 11 - Reminder of a Promise 25 Aug 2009 5:17 am
Reviewer: petuniac3 (Signed) [Report This]
    yesssssss

    Author's Response: I hope that's a good "yesssssss..."  there.  I hope it is... *smile*
Title: Chapter 10 - Catalyst of Concession 25 Aug 2009 5:08 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought I reviewed this chapter already but I guess I didn't. Well I really like this story and I'm glad Tevin was found. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review!  I'm so happy you are enjoying it so far!  Hope you like the next chapter, too! 
Title: Chapter 11 - Reminder of a Promise 25 Aug 2009 2:36 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    For some reason I'm glad that you made Ophelia say no at first. Most fics I read people imediately say yes, this way made it feel all the more real.

    It was really heartbreaking to see Severus having to give up Tevin and Tevin doing his best to not let his Daddy go.

    Can't wait till the next chapter, I wonder if Tevin is still mad at Ophelia for making his Daddy sad :) it'll be fun if she has to gain the trust of little Snape-Evans lol a force to be reckoned with!

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing again!  I figured if anyone was bombarded with a request like that their first instinct would be to say no, until they were either convinced otherwise or had time to think about it.  So, I'm glad you liked that.  I'm tying to also get Tevin a little more vocal as the story is continuing, because soon is going to be a time jump and he'll be very vocal then.  As to him being angry at Ophelia...well, he's a little protective of his Daddy, so she may have some work ahead of her. 
Title: Prologue & Chapter 1 - Of Unknown Locations 24 Aug 2009 11:34 pm
Reviewer: salazarschild (Signed) [Report This]
    awesome story write more

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I was actually about to update!  So you will be getting a bonus!  Thanks for reviewing!

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