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Title: Chapter 9 - Adjusting 16 Aug 2009 10:49 pm
Reviewer: petuniac3 (Signed) [Report This]
    too cute

    Author's Response: Thank you! 
Title: Chapter 9 - Adjusting 16 Aug 2009 9:50 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked your colorful stone this chapter--what a good idea! Harry was very cute too :). I'm glad Severus was finally able to leave his room and teach, though I'm still worried about Lupin being caught. I hope this all turns out okay!

    Great chapter!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Severus and Remus are both worried about being caught.  (I know something they don't know...*evil grin*)  Thank you for your review!  More is coming soon.  I was on a bit of a writing spree for the last few days, but unfortunately had slim or no internet available to post.  TIS REMEDIED NOW!  Hope you enjoy the next as well.  Thanks! 

Title: Chapter 8 - Clarity 13 Aug 2009 6:35 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG!!! That was so sad! So beautifully sad! Poor Sev! I wanted to cry for him! And poor Lily! What a wretched state she was in! O- and poor Remus, not knowing anything! But YAY Filius! I love that little goblin man! Twenty points to him!

    O, my heart broke like ten times when I read this, which means that I totally loved it! (I like the drama *shrug*) But yay for Remus stepping up! Twenty points to him too!

    Again, another wonderful chapter! I look forward to the next!! (PS love the history behind everything, so twenty points to you!)

    Author's Response: Yes, Remus and Flitwick are really important in this story, so we'll be seeing a lot more of those two.  Glad the emotional turmoil carried through.  Glad you are liking it!  And thank you so uch for reviewing.  I get so excited and smile whenever I get a review.  (I'm sure you can sympathize with that feeling.) 
Title: Chapter 7 - Recollections of a Werewolf 13 Aug 2009 4:00 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    YAY! This was wonderful! I loved your anagram for Lily! When I saw it,I was like, "wait a minute..." Very good! I never thought to do one for Lily! And Harry's...Tevin's name is really cute! I like Ryker (but then again I am a Treky^^)

    LOL!! I LOVED when Harry...Tevin, laughed that Sirius was in jail!! That was histerical! I burst out laughing when I read that! And little Tevin wouldn't come out from under the couch, too cute!

    Poor Remus,he's such a good guy! I'm a little annoyed with James though since he wouldn't let Lily appoint the godfather. WTF James! Made me made for Remus.

    And I caught a little opps.In the second portion, you forgot the 'm' in Remus. It read like: "Remus stopped walking and turned to face James."

    I really liked this! Yay memories! Very good! You get corn! (that's my food for the day lol)

    Author's Response: I love corn!  (And the jell-o you gifted me with for reviewing your story!  *giggle*)  I fixed the mistake you caught, for which I am much obliged... I'm so glad you like my little Harry/Tevin and Remus.  I really enjoy writing Remus, so he'll be around for a while.  Thanks for reading/reviewing.  Hmm, what can I offer you...You get...a treacle tart?
Title: Chapter 8 - Clarity 13 Aug 2009 3:01 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, Sev crying really broke my heart. I also was truly saddened by the scene where Severus thinks the baby is his and then Lily lies and says it's not. I like your explanation for her not telling him too. Beautiful work.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Glad you liked those scenes.  I felt that Severus needed to finally cry here, because he has been strong the whole time so that he could do what he needed to do.  He had no other time to focus on his grief before this point, and after viewng memories like those again, the grief would sink in.  Glad you like it, along with that rather painful memory.  Glad you're still reading!  Thanks for the review! 
Title: Chapter 8 - Clarity 13 Aug 2009 2:31 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked this chapter. I'm glad we got to see some of Severus's and Lily's memories. I hope Severus is going to be ok. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response: He'll be alright, but he has a lot of adjusting to do before he can fully settle and get accustomed to being a father.  I'm writing as fast as I can...As you know my chapters tend to be long...
Title: Chapter 2 - Uncertainty 12 Aug 2009 2:22 am
Reviewer: Projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    cute chapeter, but severus better learn some patiences if he plans to raise a child

    Author's Response: He will.  He's a little overwhelmed right now, though.  But the patience will come.  Thanks for reading/reviewing.   (By the way...no idea what happened in my first response to you.  Something was a little whacky there...) 
Title: Prologue & Chapter 1 - Of Unknown Locations 12 Aug 2009 2:11 am
Reviewer: Projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think severus did the right thing.

    Author's Response: Thank you.  Glad you are on Severus' side!  Thanks for the revview and the reading! 

    Author's Response: Thank you.  Glad you are on Severus' side!  Thanks for the revview and the reading! 
Title: Chapter 8 - Clarity 11 Aug 2009 10:23 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, that was so sad and sweet. I like how you have Flitwick playing a prominent role in this story.

    Ooh, I just wanted to hug Sev. It must have been very difficult to fool Severus like that, but what choice did she have.

    I love the ending. I laughed when Remus changed the bed clothing to Gryffindor Red, from Slytherin Green!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  When I read that Lily's wand type was good for Charms work, I figured that she would have spent some time with Flitwick, and from there his involvement in the story was born.  Lily, James, and Severus were in one crazy lie, that ended up getting way more complicated than any of them would have imagined.   I'm glad you like Remus.  With all of the things that is messing with his head, the man needs a little familiarity, don't you think?  I love writing Remus.  Thank you for the review!  So excited! 
Title: Chapter 6 - The Trial of Severus Snape 11 Aug 2009 5:42 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad Severus was clear of all charges. How is he going to hide Harry?

    Author's Response: That's the real tough puzzler, isn't it?  The answer to that one is coming.  Thank you for the reading/reviewing! 

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