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Reviews For Sacrifices
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Great chapter! -P.G. Author's Response: Severus and Remus are both worried about being caught. (I know something they don't know...*evil grin*) Thank you for your review! More is coming soon. I was on a bit of a writing spree for the last few days, but unfortunately had slim or no internet available to post. TIS REMEDIED NOW! Hope you enjoy the next as well. Thanks!
O, my heart broke like ten times when I read this, which means that I totally loved it! (I like the drama *shrug*) But yay for Remus stepping up! Twenty points to him too! Again, another wonderful chapter! I look forward to the next!! (PS love the history behind everything, so twenty points to you!) Author's Response: Yes, Remus and Flitwick are really important in this story, so we'll be seeing a lot more of those two. Glad the emotional turmoil carried through. Glad you are liking it! And thank you so uch for reviewing. I get so excited and smile whenever I get a review. (I'm sure you can sympathize with that feeling.)
LOL!! I LOVED when Harry...Tevin, laughed that Sirius was in jail!! That was histerical! I burst out laughing when I read that! And little Tevin wouldn't come out from under the couch, too cute! Poor Remus,he's such a good guy! I'm a little annoyed with James though since he wouldn't let Lily appoint the godfather. WTF James! Made me made for Remus. And I caught a little opps.In the second portion, you forgot the 'm' in Remus. It read like: "Remus stopped walking and turned to face James." I really liked this! Yay memories! Very good! You get corn! (that's my food for the day lol) Author's Response: I love corn! (And the jell-o you gifted me with for reviewing your story! *giggle*) I fixed the mistake you caught, for which I am much obliged... I'm so glad you like my little Harry/Tevin and Remus. I really enjoy writing Remus, so he'll be around for a while. Thanks for reading/reviewing. Hmm, what can I offer you...You get...a treacle tart?
-P.G. Author's Response: Glad you liked those scenes. I felt that Severus needed to finally cry here, because he has been strong the whole time so that he could do what he needed to do. He had no other time to focus on his grief before this point, and after viewng memories like those again, the grief would sink in. Glad you like it, along with that rather painful memory. Glad you're still reading! Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: He'll be alright, but he has a lot of adjusting to do before he can fully settle and get accustomed to being a father. I'm writing as fast as I can...As you know my chapters tend to be long...
Author's Response: He will. He's a little overwhelmed right now, though. But the patience will come. Thanks for reading/reviewing. (By the way...no idea what happened in my first response to you. Something was a little whacky there...)
Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you are on Severus' side! Thanks for the revview and the reading! Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you are on Severus' side! Thanks for the revview and the reading!
Ooh, I just wanted to hug Sev. It must have been very difficult to fool Severus like that, but what choice did she have. I love the ending. I laughed when Remus changed the bed clothing to Gryffindor Red, from Slytherin Green! Author's Response: Thank you! When I read that Lily's wand type was good for Charms work, I figured that she would have spent some time with Flitwick, and from there his involvement in the story was born. Lily, James, and Severus were in one crazy lie, that ended up getting way more complicated than any of them would have imagined. I'm glad you like Remus. With all of the things that is messing with his head, the man needs a little familiarity, don't you think? I love writing Remus. Thank you for the review! So excited!
Author's Response: That's the real tough puzzler, isn't it? The answer to that one is coming. Thank you for the reading/reviewing! |
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