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Title: Chapter 35 - Remembrance & Recovery 10 Aug 2012 6:25 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really glad to hear from this story again! This chapter was bittersweet, I believe. I'm really looking forward to reading more! Please update again soon. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I am trying to fully wrap this story up while planning out the sequel.  It was definitely a bittersweet chapter.  The next and last chapters will move things right along.  Hope to hear from you again when they are up and running.  Thanks for reviewing. ~ RK
Title: Chapter 7 - Recollections of a Werewolf 06 Apr 2012 9:01 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Polyjuice all around, you are joking, right?

    Author's Response: I am not joking.  It needed to be done, as this whole wedding is a ruse.  Hope it wasn't terribly confusing.  Thanks for reviewing! ~ RK
Title: Chapter 6 - The Trial of Severus Snape 06 Apr 2012 8:38 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, I thought it was movie-inspired. Very lively.

    Author's Response: Well, it is a fantastic scene in the film, and since (other than the disciplinary hearing in OotP) it's the only criminal court scene available from which to reference, there we have it.  Thank you! ~ RK
Title: Chapter 5 - Unexpected Welcome 06 Apr 2012 6:22 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    '**** cookie crumbs ****

    Author's Response: Again, not sure if this is good or bad, but thank you for leaving a review.  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 4 - A Message and a Delivery 06 Apr 2012 5:46 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Go Remus!

    Author's Response: *throws confetti* I think Remus rocks, just my thoughts there.  He's massively important to this story, so his involvement only gets bigger.  Thanks, again! ~ RK
Title: Chapter 3 - Decisive News 06 Apr 2012 3:22 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, well, nothing to say, sorry

    Author's Response: Not sure if that is good or bad, but thank you for reviewing, either way.  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 2 - Uncertainty 06 Apr 2012 3:14 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    A bit slow, I guess you are aiming for a really long story :)

    Author's Response:

    Sorry it's a little slow.  Details are fun.  :)  The finished story totals in at 40 chapters.  Thanks!  ~ RK

Title: Prologue & Chapter 1 - Of Unknown Locations 06 Apr 2012 2:21 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Promising

    Author's Response: Thank you.  Hope you stick with it. ~ RK
Title: Chapter 34 - Martyrdom & Mercy 30 Mar 2012 10:03 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, what a very sad chapter... Poor Ophelia-- and poor Tevin, who will obviously blame himself for the accident which (presumably) led to her death. Even if he is made to understand about the Vow, it's going to be tough going for little Tevin. Poor Severus, for the pain he's experiencing, and poor Arabella-- what an awful way to go, and poor Mister Snowflake. To top it off, poor Remus, for having to impersonate Arabella-- and how exactly are the kneazles going to react to a werewolf living in their home??! This I've got to see! Well, kneazles are supposed to be intelligent, so maybe it'll work out... Hmmm... HOPE it works out! I can certainly appreciate how difficult it was to write this chapter, but you did an excellent job! Looking forward to the next update already! :-)

    Author's Response:

    Yes, it is an emotionally intense chapter.  Thank you for your review.  Nice to hear from you again! :) Thanks for the compliments.  They certainly make me smile.  Hope to hear from you again, soon.  ~ RK

Title: Chapter 34 - Martyrdom & Mercy 30 Mar 2012 1:05 am
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Signed) [Report This]
    how did she break her vow???? She didnt tell anyone?? she didnt do anything on purpose... I am a bit confused

    Author's Response:

    I was hoping this wouldn't be too confusing.  Sorry that you are.  Here we go; hope this helps:

    The part of her vow that she violated was: "Will you...[put] Tevin's safety and well-being above that of all others..." By ignoring the injuries of the boys and bringing Arabella to get help before them she violated that part of her vow.  Even if it isn't on purpose, the wording of the vow would not take into account intention or accident, especially if she is present at the time that Tevin requires need of safety or care.  The cold black & white logic of the thing is that Tevin was injured, she ignored it, thus did not put his safety and well-being above all others - in this case Arabella's, which is why the vow determined that it was broken. 

    Does that make sense?  I hope so. 

    Thank you for reading and leaving a review!  Hope to hear from you again!

    ~ RK


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