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Reviews For Sacrifices
Hmm...she is still lying about Lily and James' deaths, isn't she? Author's Response: Thank you for your review! Yes, Petunia is definitely still lying about James' and Lily's deaths. Keep reading, and you'll find out where Harry is.
How does Severus plan to hide the child's identity if he takes him to Hogwarts? DD will be immediately suspicious. Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing a lot. That makes me thrilled! And yeah, I try my best with the Latin, since I do not know it. I try to describe what the spells do after they say them if I make them up so that you don't have to know what they're exactly saying to know what's going on. And yes, Dumbledore would be very suspicious, but once Severus gets back to Hogwarts he is bought time by a series of events happening out of control, which helps him in the long run, because these events keep DUmbledore a little bit distracted...Keep reading, and you'll find out. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Because the level of writing in this story is very high, I want to mention a problem: "Professor Dumbledore," he greeted. (dialogue) Remus tried to reassure. In both cases, you are missing an object. It should read: "Professor Dumbledore," he greeted him. Remus tried to reassure him. The 'greeted' one really infests fanfic and sets my teeth on edge every time I read it. Author's Response: Thanks for the grammar help! I sometimes miss silly mistakes, and have no problem with someone correcting it (if that person explains why something should be different, even better)! So thank you for that. Sorry about grating your nerves with the "greeted" thing...If I catch it in future chapters, I'll try to substitute it for something else. *sheepish expression* Thank you for reviewing!
Author's Response: Your welcome, and thank you for reviewing. It makes me very excited and happy!
"It will be taken." Love the ambiguity of that lien... Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you picked up on that line. I figured she would be all cryptic like that. And more will be revealed about the kidnapper soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! Hope you continue reading! Reviews make me happy, and I am happy right now...
Author's Response: Well, I have a bunch of chapters written, but it got to the point right now where I had to make up a story bible for it, otherwise I would forget my own details.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you like it! Just finished reviewing your latest chapter actually.
This was really freaking amazing!! I absolutely LOVE your prologue!!Loved everything about it actually. Very good! Author's Response: I was hoping you would review! Yayness! I hope my story pleases you as much as yours pleases me! Thank you for the review! Things get complicated as it goes before things get...well, I won't say. Can't give too much away, now can I? Hopefully, now that I will be able to update now, I will not become lax in leaving reviews for you, my dear, though they may be slightly less substantial...*grin*
Author's Response: Oh, thank you for your review! Before we find out what happened to the boy though, we'll be visiting a few new characters. Two of them are very important to the story so a lot needs to be said about him. Glad you are enjoying it so far. |
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