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Title: Chapter 34 - Martyrdom & Mercy 29 Mar 2012 10:19 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    What a sad chapter! Please update again soon!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, it was a tough one to finally get out there.  But there is definitely more to come.  There's a total of 40 chapters to this story.  Working on the last edits of the last few chapters now.  Updates will arrive as soon as possible.  Thank you for still reading and reviewing!  ~ RK

Title: Chapter 33 - Gifts of Protection 06 Nov 2011 9:59 pm
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    awww harry and luna would be so cute together :D
    i love the way you write it makes everything seem so real please update again soon im really looking forward to the next chapter
    also are you planning on doing a sequel to this?

    Author's Response:

    "i love the way you write it makes everything seem so real"  THANK YOU!  This comment completely made my entire day (been a rough one so far, but this completely made it better!)!!!  As a matter of fact, I AM planning out a sequel.  I have a lot of re-reading/re-watching the whole thing to get my research and things straight, but once that happens, a sequel should indeed be underway!  I hope to hear from you when that begins to happen!  Thank you for reviewing!  ~ RK

Title: Chapter 12 - Reassurances 05 Nov 2011 4:22 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm truly enjoying this story, so don't take this as a flame or anything. I find it extremely difficult to believe a 17-month-old child can draw even stick figures and WRITE, much less that the adults in his life wouldn't be exclaiming about what a prodigy he is for being able to do so...

    Author's Response: Well, I sort of took some liberties with the cognitive development of children in the magical world.  I am well aware of the development of a child's mental, and physical development - especially in early childhood - but the story needed to move.  So I made the magical children a little quicker to develop.  Thank you for reviewing.  (And fear not, I do not consider what you said a flame...I considered it more like a question of continuity.  So, I decided to answer it that way.)  Thanks for reviewing.  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 33 - Gifts of Protection 03 Nov 2011 3:48 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww.... Loved the sweet ending of this chap! (And yay that the story itself it finished! Way to go!) // Kudos to Celene for her calm acceptance of Remus' condition; a very nice scene, so sensitively done. And Remus and Tonks meet again... :-) // Am really intrigued by the training of the students who will be keeping eyes & ears open. This will be fascinating to watch them when they finally swing into action! (I keep remembering Flitwick vs. Fawkes!) // Good job, as always! Can't wait for the rest of the story!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, the story is finished and I am making some edits now.  Huzzah!  Glad you liked the Remus and Celene scene.  I felt it had to be done.  Poor Remus needs some acceptance in the world.  Thank you or reviewing!  The rest will be up as soon as I finish the edits.  Stay tuned! ~ RK
Title: Chapter 9 - Adjusting 03 Nov 2011 2:12 am
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    aawwww i loved this chapter especially the last scene

    Author's Response: Aww, thank you!  I was feeling mushy the day I wrote that.  Glad you loved it!  Thank you for reviewing! ~ RK
Title: Chapter 33 - Gifts of Protection 31 Oct 2011 11:25 pm
Reviewer: twilight1987 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you enjoyed it!  There's more coming soon! ~ RK
Title: Chapter 32 - Pieces of Parchment 05 Aug 2011 9:31 am
Reviewer: leanne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    excellent.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you are enjyoing! ~ RK
Title: Chapter 32 - Pieces of Parchment 28 Jul 2011 6:10 pm
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great job. like this story, well written

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you are enjoying!  More is on the way! ~ RK
Title: Chapter 32 - Pieces of Parchment 27 Jul 2011 7:01 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, NO!!! Dumbledore knows... WHAT, exactly? Does he really know that Tevin is Harry? Or is he only guessing? Is the letter to Arabella a ruse, trying to gauge Severus and Ophelia's reaction? And is it legal for Dumbledore to abduct a child, regardless of circumstances, to carry out his intended plans for the greater good? WHEW!!! Eagerly awaiting the next installment! (It had been a while, so I went back and reread the past four chapters or so before sinking into this update! Oh, also liked the bodyguard plot, and also wondering what sort of trouble Tevin will manage to get into using the Map. He knows it's intended to be used to stay safe, but KIDS WILL BE KIDS-- right??! Awesome chapter in an awesome story!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!  Sorry it took so long to respond!  Unfortunately, I cannot answer ANY of your questions without giving away the rest of the story!  Agh!  Hope you enjoy the next installments.  Thank you! ~ RK
Title: Chapter 29 - Shaken Perspectives 26 Jul 2011 5:03 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Seems I missed reviewing this chapter the first time I read it! Loved the contrast between Harry's being so accepting of Luna's eccentricities and Draco's refusing to accept Tonks, even though she is not "guilty" of anything wrong-- she just got born, as it were. Now Draco has to learn his lesson the hard way, and he's completely adrift in a sea of new ideas, without his father having the answers to every question, the way Draco always assumed he did. And Fawkes-- wonder where Dumbledore will lay the blame??! Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you.  The newest chapter is up, which I just finished yesterday!  Yes, Draco has some serious thinking to do these days.  Things will get pretty intense from now on.  Thank you for reviewing again!  ~ RK

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