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Title: Chapter 25 - Halloween Secrets - Part III 27 Mar 2010 9:29 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope that Severus will be okay. Obviously, he is ill and needs care.

    It would be better for Severus to share his thoughts and feelings about Lily, so that he can let it go, even if it is difficult for him. What happened, happened and cannot be changed, so he needs to move on and allow himself to enjoy life, even Halloween, once again.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: I'm sure Severus will pull through.  Yes, he needs to let things go, but keep in mind that even in canon the guilt he feels for somewhat causing her death haunts him up until his death.  It's not in his nature to forget.  There will be some other events that will definitely distract him from his guilt though.  Thank you for your review!!  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 25 - Halloween Secrets - Part III 27 Mar 2010 8:28 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Of course she'd give it to Harry; too bad Sev didn't think of that. At least he got the consolation of knowing he saved his own son though. Do we get to see some of these memories in the near future? I hope so. Great update--I had forgotten how much I liked this fic.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: I'm not sure if I'll be revealing all of those memories she gave him in that scene yet or not.  I have a lot more events to cover in the story that I want to keep it moving.  But if a flashback becomes necessary, then possibly.  Glad you kept reading - and still like it!  Thanks for your review!  I get excited when I get one every time!  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 24 - Halloween Secrets - Part II 27 Mar 2010 7:54 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    How did I miss this update? It was wonderful! Wow! How ironic that Severus would have found a way to reverse the killing curse, only to not have enough potion with him at the time to bring her back. Man, that's sad. I'm off to read more!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Yeah tragic for Severus, isn't it?  Glad you are still reading!  I'll post the next chapter when I find time to write.  Things are crazy right now.  Thanks for your review!  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 25 - Halloween Secrets - Part III 27 Mar 2010 9:33 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yes, people are still interested. This was a great chapter, I'm glad Opelia is starting to "become mom". Sev will be upset when he gets back that Tevin left. Great chapter, please post soon.

    Author's Response: Glad people are still interested in my story!  Yes, she is warming up to the idea of Mom.  We'll see the reactions of everyone next chapter.  It should be more lighthearted than this last three-parter chapter.  As soon as I find time to write, updates will follow.  Be patient.  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 25 - Halloween Secrets - Part III 27 Mar 2010 4:19 am
Reviewer: Rosa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So glad to find an update for this story. Thanks! It's nice to Tevin and Ophelia are getting close. Hope to see another update soon.

    Author's Response: You are welcome for the update!  Tevin and Ophelia are finally growing closer, yes.  They will be interacting a little more soon.  I'll update as soon as I find time to write again.  Thank you for the review!  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 25 - Halloween Secrets - Part III 27 Mar 2010 2:15 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Raven, what a wonderful surprise to find that you'd updated. How could you even ask if anyone is still interested in this lovely story.

    You are a really talented writer, and I get so caught up in the story. I wanted to cry right along with Severus, when Lily died. As a matter of fact, my eyes are tearing right now.

    Aw, little Tevin is such an imp, a cute imp, but an imp nevertheless.

    I can't wait for the next chappie.

    Author's Response: Glad you are still reading!  Thanks for your compliments on my writing.  I was hoping I did the death of Lily justice, because the events surrounding that Halloween night took forever to plan out and map out.  This was a nightmare of a chapter to write.  Glad you like little Tevin.  He's a little devil.  I can't wait to find the time to write the next chapter, nevermind to post it.  Be patient.  Thanks again!  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 25 - Halloween Secrets - Part III 26 Mar 2010 10:09 pm
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Real life does suck sometimes, doesn't it? No worries here Raven, I always love your writings! And I'm having trouble updating too.

    But what a dramatic chapter!! I wonderful, chapter! This was great Raven, and I mean it! I almost started crying like it ten places it got to me! The memories were the real tear jerkiers I think. And Severus's in the graveyard hit hard too. It was wonderfully done! I just loved it so much!

    Poor Ophelia though. I feel bad she always gets the blame...but poor little Tevin! That would be scary to come home and not find anyone at that age! And Remus, waking up to realize that his godson's gone! AND then last, poor Severus! Now he's sick too! Everyone's so sad in this!

    But this was wonderful Raven! I'm really glad you updated! Sorry I can't review more, but I have class. Brilliant chappie!! :D

    Author's Response: Sorry for making emotional (but at least it lets me know I'm doing my job!), but I am glad you liked this chapter.  It took forever to write.  When I get the next chapter up and running it should be a little more light-hearted than usual.  (Draco should be back!)  And yes, real life does suck soemtimes, but what can you do but persevere?  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 24 - Halloween Secrets - Part II 25 Dec 2009 12:09 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    o.0 HOLY MOLEY SEVERUS SNAPE! That's awesome! >_

    Author's Response: Thanks.  Hope you like the next section of this chapter is to your satisfaction as well.  Thanks for reviewing again! ~ RK
Title: Chapter 24 - Halloween Secrets - Part II 21 Dec 2009 11:12 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    O_O WOW! Well, this was fantastic! Well worth the wait Raven! Poor Severus! He gave everything he had to try and save Lily. The part where Jayce asks Severus if that was all the money he had really got me. It was so sad! And then when he thought the potion didn't work and threw the cauldron...I wanted to cry, but then right away the toad was alive! YAY!! He did! I always knew Snape was the greatest Potions Master in the world! ;D

    But poor Sev in "present" time. He's still so sad. He thinks he killed Lily, and he just wants to hold her again, but he can't! So sad! And he can't get away from nightmares. Sad. Hopefully Tevin will make him feel better soon.

    Another fantasic chappie Raven! Again I say, well worth the wait! :D

    Author's Response: Glad you like it so much!  This part and Part III are the toughest parts to write for this massive chapter.  Yes, Severus did everything he could and gave everything he had.  And yes, Severus is still devestated by Lily's death, because he is overwhelmed by the guilt and the loss.  Thank you!  I hope the last part of this chapter is also worth the wait when I finish and post it.  (I'm slowly catching up on your story.  I'm still busy, but things will hopefully slow down soon.  I will catch up!)  Thanks for reviewing!  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 24 - Halloween Secrets - Part II 21 Dec 2009 9:12 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    You did a wonderful job! Severus tried everything to save Lily and Jame's lives. His love for her was that of a soul mate. Thank you for this updatte!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, he tried everything to save them.  There is more of this in Part III.  And you are most welcome for the update.  I post when I can.  Thanks for sticking with it!  ~ RK

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