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Title: Chapter 20 - Christmas Curiosities 13 Nov 2009 5:50 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Will be find out the secret that the old wand maker knows??? Ever?? Great chapter. I don't blame Olphelia for not wanting to go, I wouldn't have either.

    Author's Response:

    In a long distant future chapter (or I may even save it for the sequel) will the wand maker's secret knowledge be revealed.  I wouldn't go either, so I'm glad you can sympathize with Ophelia there.  Thank you for another review!  ~ RK

Title: Chapter 13 - Seeking Anonymity 13 Nov 2009 10:59 am
Reviewer: Silvercloud (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Umm, i almost hate to say this (since i love the story), but.... what about the portraits in Dumbledores Office?

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review, and I'm glad you like the story so far.  As to your question:  Well, they do sleep, or go traipsing around the castle throughout the day.  And also, not all of them can possibly be supportive of every headmaster in the history of the school, now can they?  There may be more to that, there may not be...We'll have to wait and see...  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 18 - Tense Discussions 13 Nov 2009 1:08 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, that went as I expected....I want to just slap Lucias face.....Cissa I think in trying because she knows she will need Severus' good will at a later time, but I also believe she is not as cold or cruel as her husband. Great work.

    Author's Response: Leave it to Lucius - always has a good blood-heritage jab ready.  Narcissa is trying and for the very reason you mentioned.  Yay!  And you are correct, she is more compassionate than Lucius.  (I love writing the Malfoys.  That whole family fascinates me!  Lucius is actually up there on my Favorite Characters of Harry Potter list.)  There will be much more of the Malfoys in this story.  Thank you for another review!  This is making my miserable day so much better! ~ RK
Title: Chapter 17 - A Meeting of Destiny 13 Nov 2009 12:48 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Draco and Harry, who would have thought! This could be very interesting. Liked that Draco was the first to ask about being friends, that makes me think that he really doesn't have any......dinner should be interesting. I don't like the way Ophelia was ignored! Bad Lucias and Cissa.

    Author's Response: Draco has friends already.  Unfortunately, they're Crabbe and Goyle.  Not the most fun nor intelligent playmates, right?  Dinner will indeed be interesting.  Yes, the Malfoys ignored Ophelia, but after all she is a Muggleborn and not worth their attention or politeness in their opinion. Glad to get another review from you!  Thank you for reading!  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 9 - Adjusting 12 Nov 2009 1:25 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Loving this story so far!! Tevin in Hufflepuff with a Slytherin father, that is just so wrong and so many levels!!! LOL

    Author's Response: I' so thrilled you are enjoying my story!  I'm enjoying writing it!  Yes, can you imagine if Tevin ends up a Hufflepuff?  *snort*  I think Severus would either laugh in shock or drop over.  Thank you again for your review!  I love them!  Thanks for reading too! ~ RK
Title: Chapter 6 - The Trial of Severus Snape 11 Nov 2009 8:32 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Why do I feel Prof Flitwick will have a large part of the "Harry secret?" I always loved his character and always wanted to know more about that man. Small in size but powerful in magic! Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Flitwick is important in this story as well.  There are many, many things that are solved and puzzled out by the little Charms professor.  I always wanted to know more about Flitwick too, and so I therefore decided to make it up!  Thanks again for another reveiw!  ~ RK
Title: Chapter 5 - Unexpected Welcome 11 Nov 2009 8:03 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow what a chapter!!! I always wondered how Severus was taken away. This was not what I had in mind, but now that I've read it here, it makes more sense than my verson. Everyone at the ministry would be out for the blood of every Death Eater, look how Sirus was put into prision with NO trail. At least in the canon the Death Eaters got some sort of trail. Love the fact that Remus is now hiding Harry. He and Severus work very well together! Great chapter! Keep up the great work!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I find it strange how in canon Sirius had no trial, yet someone like Karkaroff would.  Maybe it's because there were "witnesses" to Sirius's crime?  I'm not sure.  Glad that you like Remus's involvement here.  He'll be around a lot more in the story.  Thank you again! 
Title: Chapter 22 - The Halloween Feast 11 Nov 2009 3:28 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, that was cute. I loved the interaction between the boys and the other students. Will they make more appearances? I hope so :).

    That part at the end was sweet too. At first, I thought Harry wouldn't understand because he's so young, so it was refreshing to have him guess correctly.

    Exactly how old are the boys now? It seems like you jumped through time and made them older, but I'm not sure how much. I've been picturing them as four or five year olds, but I was just curious as to how old you envision them.

    Very nice chapter--I can't wait for more!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  The boys might be hanging around in Hogwarts more in the story, so more students will make appearances - even some more familiar ones, not just Bill Weasley.  I would usualy think that a young child wouldn't be able to understand, but I rather liked the idea of him being able to read his father easily.  There are only a few things that make Severus upset and Tevin has filed that information in his head.  His a smart little cookie!  And Draco and Tevin are five years old.  So that is correct!  I thought I stated it somewhere in there, but if I didn't...oops!  Hope the next chapter does not disaapoint.  It's long. ~ RK
Title: Chapter 22 - The Halloween Feast 11 Nov 2009 7:04 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the Slytherins! :D
    Though I'm sad Severus is sad and that Tevin is sad! T_T I can't wait for the next chapter!
    Also I wonder why Tevin said to Draco to get him to eat...hm...

    Author's Response:

    Yeah! Glad you liked my made up Slytherins!  Halloween is tough for Severus, and Tevin doesn't like to see his father upset or angry.  The next chapter is long and will take a while but it will be posted as soon as possible.  As to what Tevin said to Draco, lt's just say that he's a persuasive little boy.  *wink* Thanks for reviewing! ~ RK

Title: Chapter 21 - Strengthened Bonds 11 Nov 2009 7:03 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw poor Tevin he just wanted to have some fun but Draco had to be a bit spoiled there and say he said a spell under his breath. I guess it'll happens. Also I'm glad Minnie bit Lucius he needed to wake up lol! Also I hope no one else notices Tevin say Fay instead of mom/my!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, it's Draco's way of ending the game but still winning, even if it is a total lie!  Glad you liked Minnie biting Lucius.  And Tevin was talking with Severus here when he called Ophelia "Fay" instead of "mom(my)."  That should be explained in the next chapter.  Hope it won't disappoint.  Thanks for your review! ~ RK


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