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Title: Chapter 1: The Boy Will Not Cry 11 Aug 2009 4:38 pm
Reviewer: amainage (Signed) [Report This]
    lol Sev is not too happy with his Wolf.
    Remus is very Happy to get to see what Harry looks like, look forward to see how the visit goes.

    Like how you portrayed Severus. His loathe of the cats was funny even more so when I read further and found that there were only 4 cats. He complained like there were tons (cats) practically hanging off the rafters. nice chap
Title: Prologue 10 Aug 2009 8:17 pm
Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awww poor Harry!
    Very well written, a well thought out process to detail and emotion.

    Author's Response: Thank you. I hope that you continue to enjoy it. :-)
Title: Prologue 10 Aug 2009 7:57 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor small Harry...I'll give him a hug! Beautifully written and I'm looking forward to more.

    Author's Response: It's hugs all round for Harry I think! Thanks for your review; I hope that you enjoy the rest!
Title: Prologue 10 Aug 2009 4:09 pm
Reviewer: amainage (Signed) [Report This]
    I look forward to reading more of your story. Like how you show things from Harry's POV. horrible for Harry so far at least he's got a bear even though it's raggedy and is not much of an consolation. Good luck and send plot bunnies your way to help you finish your story.

    Author's Response: Thank you! Thanks for the plot bunnies as well, I have just written chapter 13 so they have arrived safely. Teddy will get better when Harry does, don't worry. :-)
Title: Prologue 10 Aug 2009 1:35 pm
Reviewer: ----- (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oooo, I want more plz :D
    Intriguingggg

    Author's Response: Well I've written up to chapter 13 but thought I'd post it slowly so that you don't have a huge chunk and then have to wait ages for an update. Thanks for the review!
Title: Prologue 10 Aug 2009 7:57 am
Reviewer: Silvercloud (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Further to my previous review,
    My begging you to keep writing stems from my despair (Yes I know, I'm being dramatic) when a fic I'm reading is discontinued.
    Your off to a good start and I'm looking forward to reading more.

    PS. I just noticed the option to rate the fic/chapter; I would like to advise that if I'd noticed the option, my previous review would also have given you a rating (10!)

    Author's Response: Thank you for such a lovely review! Don't worry, I don't plan on abandoning this. I have just finished writing chapter 13 but will be posting at a slower rate so that you don't have a huge chunk followed by nothing for agaes. Hope that's okay. :-)
Title: Prologue 10 Aug 2009 7:50 am
Reviewer: Silvercloud (Anonymous) [Report This]
    WOW

    I've got shivers going down my spine and its only the prologue! PLEASE keep writing!!

    Author's Response: Thank you! See other reply for details. ;-)
Title: Prologue 10 Aug 2009 4:11 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Welcome to P & S, SWMBO, and what a lovely, well-written story.

    Sad, but intriguing. I'm looking forward to more.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much. I have only just discovered what a treasure trove this site is! The only sad thing is that so many of the fantastic stories seem to have been discontinued. I don't plan on doing that to mine and have already got 13 chapters written and counting. I will post later if I can remember how I had to format the prologue for it to load properly!

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