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Reviews For Lines of Reasoning
Title: Chapter 5 / Opening Night 29 Apr 2010 6:27 am
Reviewer: thebookivore (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I cracked up over your punch line in this chapter - Blaise says "I think red goes well with my complexion." How to make sorting go evenly, and destroy all our preconceptions that the sorting has any meaning in one fell swoop. Good job.
Title: Chapter 5 / Opening Night 12 Sep 2009 8:05 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting twist with Zabini in Gryffindor, though you hinted at it when you had someone at the Slytherin table mutter that the numbers were even. So far, this fic is pretty good. I can tell that you write vignettes because each chapter seems to have a sense of finality to it; other than this one, each one seemed very complete on it's own. This one has a more open feeling, which is nice too.

    Anyways, I'll openly admit that I'm not too sure what was happening in the prologue, but I'm guessing that it will make more sense later. I'm excited to find out what Harry will think of Potions--I hope he likes them even if they aren't quite what he had originally hoped for.

    I'm looking forward to more!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for a detailed review ^^

    I have a feeling that the Hat keeps a tally rather than just sorting. So someone had to go to Gryffindor in exchange. And it was Theo Nott who counted (Harry sat between the Prefect and the rest of the first-years).

    I rather thought I was rather obvious with Zabini with "two students at the end of the list" - Weasley and him ^_^

Title: Chapter 5 / Opening Night 12 Sep 2009 6:15 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ron is an ass, and so is Seamus!!! What's with them thinking that Harry is the next Dark Lord or something?

    Oh, you are such a talented artist. I love that picture!!! Too funny as well. What is Snape holding? A cup of coffee?

    Author's Response:

    They are but 11-year-olds, imaginative and knowing nothing but bed-time stories of a boy who mysteriously offed a Dark Lord. And Gryffindors at that =D

    Yup, that's coffee. In a Slytherin mug, a gift from older students *spoiler* I've written a scene for later chapters to complement the idea of Snape and coffee and was thinking of it while drawing ^_^

Title: Chapter 5 / Opening Night 12 Sep 2009 4:36 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Ron is such an idiot.
    Good chapter. :-)

    Thanks for the recognition. :-P

    Author's Response:

    It always thrills me to think that someone keeps reading my fic and at the same time thinks it's worth the effort of beta-ing ^^

     Ron is.. easily excitable *mutters* Okay, me and my muse may not like him very much >_>;; But we try to be fair, honestly.


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