| Title: Chapter 1: Unexpected Problem
| 06 Dec 2016 1:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved how Severus' actions are so different from his thoughts and words thank you
| Title: Chapter 1: Unexpected Problem
| 02 May 2013 2:18 am
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| Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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| Title: Chapter 1: Unexpected Problem
| 01 May 2011 6:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Fujoshi (Signed)
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So this one wonders...
Suddenly Severus felt a sharp tug on the back on his robes. Snapping his head back, he looked down to see a little baby with a lightning bolt scar sitting on his cloak with a fist full of black material, giggling.
Where the heck did the scar go, since you said it was no more, later in the story...
hmm? xD
| Title: Chapter 1: Unexpected Problem
| 19 Sep 2009 4:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Britt K (Anonymous)
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You...are...a...GENIOUS! I've only read the first chapter and so far i love it!!
Ahh...poor Snape...Let me know when you write more stories...hehe i might just be able to come up with some illustrations.
Does this mean i get a cookie too?? :D
Author's Response: HOLY CRAP!! Are you my Britt K??? OMG!! I totally love you!!! I can't believe you really got on and read this!! I thought you'd just think I was weird, smile and nod and that would be the end of it!! YAY!!! Five hundred thousand points to you!! ( yes I can do that) And we should totally hook up at the OKfest and talk illustrations! OOO! I'm so excited!! Thanks so much for the review!!! Have as many cookies as you want!!! XD
So far, this is the best start to a de-aging fic that I've ever read. Snape is hilariously hysterical without being over the top. Dumbledore's perfect.
Author's Response: Why, thank you very much!! That means a lot! Glad you're enjoying it!!! :D
aw, baby harry is adorable. I love when snape called him a squishy pink thing. lolz. just one note- it's "it would not do to wake the child up", not "it would not due to wake the child up".
Author's Response: Oh! opps! Sorry about that. I'll go fix it. Thanks for the review!!
| Title: Chapter 1: Unexpected Problem
| 17 Aug 2009 3:26 pm
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| Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed)
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My favourite bit had to be Harry's appearance! ;) But a close second would be Dumbledore looking 'bit too feeble at that moment to be believable'. Well done! x
Author's Response: lol Thanks! Glad you liked it! XD
Ha--the staff is 'getting on in years!' I love Dumbledore's cunning! Oh, I'm so excited about this fic! I am such a sucker for cute baby fics and after reading your other story, I am certain that this one is going to be well-written. I'm off to the next chapter!
-P.G.
Author's Response: Oh! Thank you very much! I wanted this one to be funny, so I'm glad everyone's taking to it! :)
| Title: Chapter 1: Unexpected Problem
| 10 Aug 2009 11:49 pm
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| Reviewer: K80 (Anonymous)
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Well sister you truly are a talented writer. You have grown in your writing experience and it is so great to see you writing about what you enjoy. I love this chapter and particularly enjoyed the part where baby Harry is "sneaking" up on Snape. I can just imagine the glee on baby Harry's face at being pulled on long robes, and likewise poor Snape's horrified expression at the fact that there is a baby on his robes, and a Potter babe at that! Loved every minate of it! You *pause* are *pause* AWESOME! =D
Author's Response: AWW!!! Thank you! I'm SUPER glad you liked it!!! I have fun writing it, and I'm just so happy you liked it! Hope you like the next chappie too!! ^^
| Title: Chapter 1: Unexpected Problem
| 10 Aug 2009 7:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed)
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Oh, my, LOL! That is just too cute. Baby Harry is adorable, and I loved Severus' private thoughts.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks! ^_^ I'm glad you liked it!
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