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Reviews For Tug
Author's Response: Teehee! Thanks! I liked that line too. I couldn't help but add that in. It's a little bit of an inside joke, but it works! Thanks again!^^
I caught a small error while I read: "Who could, such a nasty, squishy pink thing?" It should be written something like: "Who could like such a nasty, squishy pink thing?" Great start, I'll be waiting to read more! :D Author's Response: Opps! Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
Author's Response: Thanks! :) (Between us, I liked that line too^^)
I loved the bit where Myrtle tells Snape he'd be better looking if he smiled. And the part where Snape is telling himself that he was not a gentle man. Don't fight it Sev, you're gonna cave eventually. He's powerless against the cute that is baby Harry. :D Can't wait for the next chapter Author's Response: Aww! Thanks! I'm glad you like it! :) |
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