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Title: Chapter 1: Unexpected Problem 09 Aug 2009 10:29 am
Reviewer: BuTTerMeLLow (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful start! I love how you've written Snape's point of view, and the reaction between him and Harry has already been so fun. Dumbledore's exclamation of "That's adorable!" was really fantastic. Definitely looking forward to more! ^_^

    Author's Response: Teehee! Thanks! I liked that line too. I couldn't help but add that in. It's a little bit of an inside joke, but it works! Thanks again!^^
Title: Chapter 1: Unexpected Problem 09 Aug 2009 9:49 am
Reviewer: Sympliciti (Signed) [Report This]
    Hahaha. I've read quite a few deaging fics before, but this is just hilarious!

    I caught a small error while I read:

    "Who could, such a nasty, squishy pink thing?"

    It should be written something like: "Who could like such a nasty, squishy pink thing?"

    Great start, I'll be waiting to read more! :D

    Author's Response: Opps! Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 1: Unexpected Problem 09 Aug 2009 9:43 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love deaging stories and this one is starting out great. I love the line "what, they stir it in the loo". Can't wait for next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks! :) (Between us, I liked that line too^^)
Title: Chapter 1: Unexpected Problem 09 Aug 2009 9:25 am
Reviewer: reven (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aww, gotta love a baby Harry story. :)

    I loved the bit where Myrtle tells Snape he'd be better looking if he smiled.

    And the part where Snape is telling himself that he was not a gentle man. Don't fight it Sev, you're gonna cave eventually. He's powerless against the cute that is baby Harry. :D

    Can't wait for the next chapter

    Author's Response: Aww! Thanks! I'm glad you like it! :)

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