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Title: Chapter 3: Unbearable Brat 13 Aug 2009 8:03 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Anyone who has ever had a baby can identift, great chapter. My favorite line is "he felt his dignity slip down several notches as he walked around his class, looking at the potions with the baby on his hip". I can picture it!

    Author's Response: XD Glad you liked it. And thanks for the review!!
Title: Chapter 3: Unbearable Brat 13 Aug 2009 5:20 am
Reviewer: Jaylen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ivy-Green,
    I have to say I have been thoroughly enjoying your story. It is sooo funny. Your sense of timing is great, as is your depiction of Snape. As a mother of four, I find his reactions to things hilarious. Can't wait for the next chapter!!

    Author's Response: Why, thank you very much! I'm glad you like it! As a mother of no kids, I hope my reactions for Snape are okay. I figured they would be since I'd be in the same baot as Sev :S But I'm so glad you like it! Thanks for the lovely review, and I'll be updating really soon!
Title: Chapter 3: Unbearable Brat 13 Aug 2009 4:41 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Ivy, this chapter is hilarious. Poor Sev, he's the only one Harry likes. I hope our professor gets a decent nights sleep.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks. I know, poor Sev, right? He's been very good, don't you think? Maybe he'll sleep better, or maybe he'll just get used to it. lol Thanks again!

Title: Chapter 3: Unbearable Brat 13 Aug 2009 3:30 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    ROFL loved this chapter. Poor Sev.

    Author's Response: lol Thank you!!
Title: Chapter 3: Unbearable Brat 13 Aug 2009 3:17 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Ha! Nice last line! I also liked "The longer the crying went on, the more he felt like he was just going to snap and kill everyone in the Great Hall."--100% pure Snape right there.

    Poor guy. He so wanted to be able to pass him off to Poppy or Minerva, but no such luck. I love the wit of this fic! Great job!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thanks!! ^^ You get all the corn you want! I'm glad you're enjoying it as I'm trying to make this funny.
Title: Chapter 3: Unbearable Brat 13 Aug 2009 2:59 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    OOOOOOO.....CORN!!
    CORN CORN CORN!
    Achem....nice chapter...yup

    Author's Response: lol Don't worry about your dignity, I like corn too! lol Thanks for the chapter!
Title: Chapter 3: Unbearable Brat 13 Aug 2009 2:43 am
Reviewer: reven (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, I just love this story! It is so funny and I just giggled my way through this chapter. Hee, poor Sev, dreaming about being a housewife.

    I especially like the parts from little Harry's point of view. The line "this man was good, this man was his" made me awww, it was so cute.

    And the fact that Harry doesn't want anyone but Snape is too adorable. Keep up the good work. :D

    Author's Response: Aww! Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it! I thought a clingy Harry would be fun. Goes along with that torturing Snape thing I mentioned earlier. *teehee*:)
Title: Chapter 3: Unbearable Brat 13 Aug 2009 2:40 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    OmG!!!! That was hilarious.

    Oh there were just too many perfect lines to count, but I think the last one was the best.

    "The Potions Master dreamed about being a housewife that night."

    Too perfect!! Box of corn. I love corn!! Yummy.

    Can't wait for more baby Harry.

    Author's Response: lol Thanks!! I added the last line before I submitted. I almost didn't but I'm glad everyone liked it! ^^

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