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Title: Chapter 4: Underestimated Resentment 21 May 2010 1:16 am
Reviewer: sarah (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i like snape is harry's father stories as well.

    Author's Response: Good! Hope you enjoy the rest! :D
Title: Chapter 4: Underestimated Resentment 09 Sep 2009 5:12 am
Reviewer: hacklebolt (Signed) [Report This]
    He fainted haha, what a shocker for Severus.

    Author's Response: XD That was one of my favorite things to torture him with! XD (I'm so mean)
Title: Chapter 4: Underestimated Resentment 05 Sep 2009 7:18 pm
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    corn and smoothies? seems like a weird combination.

    Author's Response: I'm just a weird kinda person some times *shrugs* XD Thanks for reviewing!!
Title: Chapter 4: Underestimated Resentment 31 Aug 2009 1:25 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how Harry calls Snape Dada and how Dumbledore hates Umbridge. I also like the two talks Snape and Umbridge had in this chapter, it made me laugh.

    Author's Response: GOOD! ^-^ Glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 4: Underestimated Resentment 28 Aug 2009 6:00 pm
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed) [Report This]
    Alright, I'm having another completely dreadful day today (it's even raining outside, even though I personally like the rain...) HAHA! The shout through the floo at Dumbledore at four in the morning! The image of Snape in a rocking chair with this insomniac expression is cracking me up! And then he cried! *laughs!!* That would have been hilarious if he were so tired he transfigured the pillow into a teddy bear that had only one arm or something because he was just so tired. *guffaaws* "Was it illegal to drug babies!?" Harry liking Snape's punishments! *falls over* Poor Severus is so confused and exhausted! Can't even get a simple joy! Got to the hair pulling this time! Love how you used Harry's thought that he wanted the hair for his own! So funny!

    Oh, oh, oh! Umbridge did not! *laughs* Nice comeback Snape! I hate that pink "rubbish" too, even those kitty plates (and I have a few cats, too)! *laughs again* Snape's twisted idea of Umbridge's death! Haha! Taken points from the snooty Ravenclaws for talking about proper childcare!

    Oh, no! Now Umbridge is sitting next to him! It's amazing Snape doesn't kill her! (Although that rule is interesting there about young children living in the castle!) While it was nice to see his protective/possessive side, hilarious when Harry called him "Dada!" My eyeballs bugged out probably as much as Snape's! "Proper Protocol," eh? *giggle* HE ACTUALLY TOOK A LEMON DROP! *falls over again* AND THEN A HANDFUL! HAHA! I suspected that he would end up being his father, but poor Severus! Not what he wanted to hear! *laughs loudly!* (As you could have guessed, I too am a sucker for Snape being Harry's father...)

    Thanks for this story...Won't read another chapter until another dreadful day like today, but thanks for this story so I can laugh! (OOH! Smoothies!? I LOVE SMOOTHIES! Can I have a Strawberry/Banana one?)

    Author's Response: YAY!! Not that you're having a bad day mind you, but because this chapter made you feel a little better. I'm really glad! And Yes, I could not help but make Sev Harry's dad. It was too strong of urge I say!! But I'm VERY glad you liked it, and I'm glad it helped your day! *ashamed* I'm afraid I haven't had time to read your last two chapters *blush* BUT I'm planning them for this weekend once school gives me a break. lol So, grab a smoothie and have a better day!! ^-^
Title: Chapter 4: Underestimated Resentment 25 Aug 2009 3:01 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    lol. love your snape. He's just so totally helpless against Harry's attacks. ;) And you got him to eat the lemon drops!!!! ;D
    PS. Good luck in college - hope you settle in really quick!x

    Author's Response: Aww, thanks! You're sweet. I'm all moved in nicely. And I'm really glad you liked the chapter! Yays! Have a lemon drop yourself! :D
Title: Chapter 4: Underestimated Resentment 19 Aug 2009 1:43 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    More parts I loved,

    “I HATE YOU FOR THIS OLD MAN!”

    ' After another ten minutes, tears started to fall from the Potions Master’s eyes as well. '

    I can imagine that happening, being unexpectedly thrown into a situation with no experience with babies, and one that wont stop crying I think I'd start to cry faster than Severus did. I felt sad for him there. But then he got his hair pulled...owch. >_<

    And Umbridge bleh! lol!

    Author's Response: I know, I'm so mean to Sev! I actually pretty bad with small children as well, as sad as that is. And I'm trying to have Sev react as I might in certain situations, so I'm glad you're enjoying his reactions. And yes, Umbridge is terrible, isn't she? She's in for a time. *Muhahahahahahaha!!!* Have a smoothie!
Title: Chapter 4: Underestimated Resentment 18 Aug 2009 9:28 pm
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    *quick commercial break* ROFL!

    Snape is Harry's dad!!! That is SOOOO cute!!! I really didn't expect that!

    *chants* smoothie, smoothie, smoothie!

    Author's Response: Yeah...*rubs back of neck* not sure what brought on the commercial...might have been the lack of sleep or something...glad you liked it though ^^ You're actually the first to comment on that. *shrug* I thought it was kinda funny, if not kinda lame. (I'm a lame person deep down...and a nerd *sigh) But I'm glad I surprised you, and yes, have a smoothie!! It's on me!
Title: Chapter 4: Underestimated Resentment 17 Aug 2009 3:07 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    ROFL. This is great. I especially love Sev roaring through the floo at 4:00 in the morning. It's hilarious. :-)

    Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you liked that! I really liked that too, but no one commented about that. Thanks for a lovely review! Have a smoothie!! ^^
Title: Chapter 4: Underestimated Resentment 15 Aug 2009 4:31 pm
Reviewer: petuniac3 (Signed) [Report This]
    I adore this story

    Author's Response: Aww! Thanks! Have a smoothie!

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