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Title: Chapter 5: Undeniably Vexing 19 Aug 2009 1:36 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Albus is an ass. Sev does not have to give up his son.

    Can't wait until Sev turns the tables on Albus... AND that FRAKING prophecy.

    Author's Response: Lol Yes, yes Dumbles is. Glad you're waiting patiently for Sev to strike. Thanks for the review! You get... apple pie! ^^
Title: Chapter 5: Undeniably Vexing 18 Aug 2009 9:34 pm
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    I would be INFURIATED at Dumbledore if I was in Snape's position! I think you dealt with their talk really well though! This line just cracked me up:

    “But she thought I was dead, thanks to Potter, and she probably would have wanted me to know that I had…that I had a…a…”

    “Son?” the Headmaster filled in.

    “Yes, yes, one of those,” Snape spat.

    I hope my pie is a nice flavour...

    Author's Response: Don't worry 'bout Snape too much. He IS a Slytherin after all. Dumbles won't be in control too much longer. *evil grin* But I'm surprised that you're the first one to comment on that particular line. I thought that was the best line (personally) You actually seem to pick up on my more subtle humor. Yay for you! Ten points to you. And let's see...I'm running out of different flavors...How about pumpkin? or maybe...custard? Have your pick! ^^
Title: Chapter 5: Undeniably Vexing 17 Aug 2009 4:33 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked the seriousness of this chapter. Honestly, I think Dumbledore is wrong and that Harry would flourish with Severus to train him about the Dark Lord's weaknesses. Severus really doesn't want Harry to go to battle though, which I can understand; of course he wants his boy to be safe. I'm very curious about how all of this will turn out. Maybe Severus could become friendly (well, friendly for Sev anyway) with Harry and could mentor him until he could tell the truth? Or, perhaps Harry will remember Severus caring for him once he's changed back? I look forward to reading more soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks again for another review! Guess you're just gunna have to wait and find out! In hte mean time you get...rubarb pie! ^^ (PS Dumbles is rarely right)

Title: Chapter 5: Undeniably Vexing 17 Aug 2009 3:52 am
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter as usual it would have had to have it at some point might aswell get it over with lol
    Can't wait for an update
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    Author's Response: Thank you very much S.S! That means a lot! Glad you like it! You get...peach pie!
Title: Chapter 5: Undeniably Vexing 17 Aug 2009 3:17 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Yey, pie!! Dude, Sev can't give up Harry! That is SOOO not okay!!! grr! Do we even know if Harry IS going to turn back?? I mean, if he grows up at a normal/semi-normal rate, then they really could just name him something else and have Sev keep him. Anyway, good chapter. :-)

    Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review, and please don't worry about Sev and Harry too much. I have a PLAN! And for another good review, you get... apple pie! Eat up!
Title: Chapter 5: Undeniably Vexing 17 Aug 2009 3:07 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope Severus does tell Harry when he gets back to normal....Albus is too manipulative and needs to but out xxx

    Great chapter xx

    Gimme the pie
    *eyes widen with glee*

    Author's Response: Don't worry overly much about Sev. Glad you liked it though. And YES! Pie's awesome. You get...custard pie! Enjoy.
Title: Chapter 5: Undeniably Vexing 17 Aug 2009 2:51 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no, Sev can't agreed to keep the revelation from Harry. Ugh. Don't let Sev fall into Dumbeldore's manipulation.

    Good chapter, though and I totally caught "The Princess Bride" reference. ;)

    Author's Response: Haha! I almost thought about telling everyone about that reference, but I thought they could figure it out on their own. ^^ And don't fret about Sev too much. And you get a...blueberry pie! :)
Title: Chapter 5: Undeniably Vexing 17 Aug 2009 2:13 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, Severus never gets a break, does he? I hope that he will figure out a way to acknowledge Harry and keep themselves safe at the same time, too.

    Great job!

    Author's Response: Thanks Kristeh! Don't worry about Sev to much. Glad you liked it. :) You get...cherry pie!
Title: Chapter 5: Undeniably Vexing 17 Aug 2009 2:01 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor Snape. He just finds out that Harry is his son, and now he has to give it up. That's just not fair. How can Dumbledore do that to him?

    Aw, I can't wait to find out what happens next!!

    You always manage to surprise us. Lovely chapter as usual.

    Author's Response: Aww! Thanks Pandora! I hope you got to read it after I fixed it. :S Somehow it all mooshed into one gianormous paragraph. :S But I did fix it. Thanks again for the lovely review!! You get...pumpkin pie!! :D

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