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Reviews For Tug
The story is funny, which makes it tolerable to overlook the mistakes in consistency. On another note, you really should check your spelling, or rather your grammar - you know tenses and aspects and stuff.
Author's Response: LOL I'm glad you like it!!!! I'm glad you liked the Umbridge scene, it was really fun to write about. lol And the book list I actually got out of a book with random quotes and funny stuff in it, and when I was typing, it was staring me in the face and I remembered about the book list, so I used a few of my favorites. Thanks again!!
Snape's snark was brilliant! Hehe, loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter! .... How can ANYONE burn popcorn!? Author's Response: Apparently stupid people burn popcorn. *big sigh* Your words to ponder are "There are daggers in men's smiles." So the lesson there is don't let anyone smile or you'll get poked with knives, pointy knives. (Yeah, I am weird today. I'm just in one of those moods I guess lol) And I'm glad you liked the snark! As I said before, I've been practicing my snark here at college since there are stupid people here that burn popcorn! XD Thanks again!!
Author's Response: Yay!!! Thanks very much! Glad you liked it! :D
Author's Response: Thanks!! I'll try and update really soon!
LOL!!! Love it!!!!! Please update....NOW:-))) Author's Response: Right now?!?!?! Give me a chance to catch my breath!! But I'm glad you liked it. Maybe I will update tomorrow or Monday. Thanks for the nice review!!
Author's Response: lol Yeah, Sev's a snarky one. ^-^ Thanks for another great review!
i lived in a dorm once for a summer program guys shower with hot water and the steam got out into the hallway and the fire alarm went off early in the morning EVERYONE had to clear out the girls had wet hair and robes had to stand outside it was cold morning too XD lol lucky me i was fine I was almost all ready to go to breakfast. harry is too cute :) I wonder if he does understand, and poor Sev's hair he's gonna loose it all lol! wonder if he'll ever get fed up enough and tie it back :) i LOVED Sev's "Nice" compliment to Umbridge it is a compliment in a way lol but more of an insult! :) I will forever remember it! A letter? hm...must sneak into the office and read it before everyone else does XD Can't wait for more. Author's Response: Well thank goodness I wasn't in the middle of a shower, or I would not have been so pleasent lol And poor Sev. He's going to have to get extra strengthening shampoo. And yay for snark! I've been practicing this week. ^-^ Your wise words/ quote is, "Look like a flower, but he the serpant under it." Thanks again for another nice review!! |
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