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Title: Chapter 9: Utterance of Affection 14 Sep 2009 9:57 pm
Reviewer: Lil Nezumi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story is quite good. I did spot a few spelling errors, but nothing that can't be corrected after the story is finished and a thorough going over of it is done. Keep it up, I can't wait to see how Snape will keep little Harry. PS: I agree with him about the nosy Gryffindors. What pests!

    Author's Response: LOL I take it you're a Slytherin too? Huzzah! And sorry about the typos. I get too into my typing some times. I'll go over the chapter again. Thanks so much for the lovely review, and I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Have a cookie!!
Title: Chapter 9: Utterance of Affection 14 Sep 2009 8:22 pm
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the dream part, it was funny. Also even though he drives me nuts, Dumbledore was funny how he was describing how he woke up and went to the loo and felt good afterwards yada yada yada. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response: :P Thanks! Glad you liked the dream!! And yeah, Dumbles is there for you to laugh and pull out your hair. Poor Snape, having to deal with all that. lol Thanks for another great review. Have a cookie! XD
Title: Chapter 9: Utterance of Affection 14 Sep 2009 6:59 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter can't wait for more

    Author's Response: ^-^ Yay, thanks! Have a cookie!
Title: Chapter 9: Utterance of Affection 14 Sep 2009 6:36 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    :0) Like this chapter, too! I figured out that the italics were a dream pretty quick, and from there found it hilarious. Snape with dreams of grandeur! And yeah, lol Dumbles is a little slow on the uptake. hmm...maybe now that Sev knows the kid is his, and is clearly attached to him, he'll object to handing him over and being obnoxious again. No, really? lol thanks for the fun chappie. :0)

    Author's Response:

    LOL Yay! I'm glad you liked the dream!! Everyone has dreams of grandeur some time in their life, right? But poor Snape's gets disturbed right when the getin' are good. lol And yeah, Dumbles finally gets it. Thanks for a great review, and I hope you'll keep on reading! Have a cookie until then!

Title: Chapter 9: Utterance of Affection 14 Sep 2009 3:47 pm
Reviewer: petuniac3 (Signed) [Report This]
    The more attached Severus gets to Harry-the more I love him-and I do so love him

    Author's Response: LOL I do so love him too. ^-^ And he is getting quite attached to little Harry. Thanks for a lovely review. Have a cookie!
Title: Chapter 9: Utterance of Affection 14 Sep 2009 8:35 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the chapter

    Author's Response: Yay! Thanks! Have a cookie. :D
Title: Chapter 9: Utterance of Affection 14 Sep 2009 8:25 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Ivy, you had me so confused at the beginning that I clicked back a chapter to make sure I didn't miss reading one. It seems like you were going for shock effect, but without warning it was a dream, it interrupted the flow of the story.

    I love that Harry plays with Sev's hair. He'd be so annoyed over anyone else doing it, but he just allows Harry. I think Dumbledore is right. Sev won't be willing to give Harry up. Nice chapter.

    ~Ella

    Author's Response: *wince* Sorry about that. I'd wanted that first section to be all italicized so that people knew something weird was going on, and for some reason when I posted, it didn't do it. I fixed it now though. Sorry again Ella. But I'm glad you liked the rest of it! And yes, Severus pretty much gave up on having Harry not playing with his hair. ^-^ Thanks for another great review. Have a cookie!
Title: Chapter 9: Utterance of Affection 14 Sep 2009 8:06 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I want Harry to stay with Sev, and let him stay Deaged, he had a horrible childhood with the dursleys. Love this story, can Hermione and Ron find out about harry.

    Author's Response: ^-^ Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying yourself! That makes me very happy. And I know Sev is getting quite attached to little Harry, but you're just going to have to wait and find out how it all ends. ;) Please keep reading! So, in the mean time, have a cookie!!XD

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