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Title: Chapter 12: Unbelievable Discovery 28 May 2010 10:09 pm
Reviewer: lilyflower06 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Suddenly Severus felt a sharp tugging on the back on his robes. Snapping his head back, he looked down to see a little baby with a lightning bolt scar sitting on his cloak, a fist full of black material, giggling.


    That was on the first chapter... I think you should fix that little mistake. =)


    PS: love the story by the way! one of the best out there.

    Author's Response: Opps! Sorry about that. I tend to do things like that all the time. But glad you liked the story. Thanks for reading! :D
Title: Chapter 12: Unbelievable Discovery 18 May 2010 12:23 am
Reviewer: Bewitchedgal (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! you had a lot on you plate during that time. I went to university and know how hectic that can be. I loved how you used a little line from the Grinch--love you sense of humor
    Good job

    Author's Response:

    yeah, school life can be hard. But I survived well enough. lol But thanks! Glad you like the humor. Thanks again for the review Bewitchedgal!

Title: Chapter 12: Unbelievable Discovery 11 Nov 2009 6:54 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    AH! I can't help it you're Harry is so adorable! Beyond words! Severus is also very cute in this chapter lol! Poor Sev he doesn't want to let Harry go even to crawl around, though I don't think Harry minds one bit!

    Author's Response:

    :D I'm super glad you like my Harry. I was going for "adorable beyond words". Did I get it? And yep! Sev's turning into a big softy with regards to Harry. Thanks for the review Fairner!! :D

Title: Chapter 12: Unbelievable Discovery 09 Nov 2009 10:27 pm
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    He never puts Harry down! That is SO sweet! I loved him yelling at Creevey too, very Snape-y! The scar being gone was a brilliant twist!

    I want a Shakespeare's sonnet please! And Happy Halloweeen to you too! (Belated in my case).

    Author's Response:

    LOL XD An over protective Snape is always cute! XD And his yelling at Creevy was just a little stroke of maddness on my part. (Had a bad day that day! XD ) But I'm glad you liked it. And NO MORE SCAR!! Had to get rid of THAT little anoying bit. XD

    So happy late Halloween to you and I seriously just got handed Halloween stickers while I was typing this review, so that's kinda cool. Wanna sticker? And the sonnet I give to you is one of my favorites: sonnet CXXVIII ( I REALLY like this one) And although I already gave this out to sprout, you might wanna look up sonnet CXXX on YouTube. It's read by Alan Rickman. Enjoy!

Title: Chapter 12: Unbelievable Discovery 05 Nov 2009 11:10 pm
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    Is the banner supposed to be up? Because I don't see it

    Author's Response: OH NO! YOu don't see it? I'll try and fix it. Thanks for letting me know!!
Title: Chapter 12: Unbelievable Discovery 05 Nov 2009 12:16 pm
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    I couldnt not give you a fangirlish scream at my sonnet... squeeeee!
    Thank you! Doesnt his voice just make you melt? And I can imagine Sev trying to woo a girl with that one too (and wondering why he failed ^-^)
    Heh, yeah you might wanna feed little Billy, poets dont do too well when you starve them... stifles the creativity or something ^-^ (learnt that last year when I kept Oscar Wilde under my bed... at least I learnt something in year 12 huh ^^)

    btw, been reading this story again from scratch... more than once ^^... and have to say thanks for the awesome story again, it honestly makes any horrible day better it is that cute ^^
    have fun x

    Author's Response:

    XD So happy you liked the sonnet!! I came across it when I wanted to listen to Alan Rickman's voice one day when it was a bad day! *dreamy sigh* I don't really care if he was cussing me out, I LOVE that man's voice!!! It gives such a...a...joygasm!!! The first time I saw Alan Rickman in something, I was like, "he looks pretty good. Nice body!" but then when I heard him speak, I was like, "OMG!!! I'm marrying that man!" lol I need to stop now or I'll talk about him forever. But yeah, I could TOTALLY see Sev reading that. But it does have a deeper meaning to it...it just comes off bad...but I'd be one of those stupid girls that wouldn't really hear the words' means and would just stare at him dreamily.

    Yeah, I GUESS I'll have to feed Bill. He's been pretty cranky lately, saying thinks like, "You, shrew, fetch me a fair meal before I murder you!" or something like that. I didn't really listen, I just shoved clothes in his face. XD But, oooo, Oscar Wilde, bet he was fun! ;D And thanks so much for the lovely complement! That really makes me happy! The whole purpuse of this was to make people smile, if not laugh, so I'm super glad you're enjoying. Have a good day!! :D

Title: Chapter 12: Unbelievable Discovery 03 Nov 2009 3:40 pm
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    YAY!!! Yay yay yay yay yay! No chosen one! Yay!

    Does this mean that Snape can keep Harry? Dumbledore shouldn't have a claim on him anymore. Can Harry remain a baby? Baby Harry is soo cute!

    Author's Response: LOL! Glad you liked my little twist! ^-^ And you'll just have to hold on a bit. Things are going to start to come together really soon. Promise! Thanks for the review! Have some candy!!
Title: Chapter 12: Unbelievable Discovery 03 Nov 2009 11:08 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful story!

    I wonder what Harry was trying to do when he brewed that potion; did he deliberately de-age himself? I love how attached he is to Severus. Dumbledore was wrong not to tell Severus early on. Harry didn't deserve to be raised by those awful muggles. His lack of faith in Severus is terrible. If I was Severus, I would say to hell with the lot of 'em and run off with my child and raise him in relative safety far from England. I also wonder if they do manage to restore Harry to age 15 will he remember the events that have happened since he was de-aged. I can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Why, thanks for the nice review, silver! I'm glad you're enjoying it! Dumbles just wants his plans to carry out and he never thought Sev could be the fathering type...but he is! XD And you'll get to find out about Harry really soon, I promise!! Thanks again for the review, and have some candy!!
Title: Chapter 12: Unbelievable Discovery 02 Nov 2009 10:47 pm
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, Ivy. Now that is certainly an interesting way to deal with Harry being the chosen one. I like it. I wonder if that was somehow in Harry's plan.

    Someone must be getting into the Christmas spirit because I totally caught the Grinch reference. ;)

    I loved the part with the professors criticizing Sev's parenting skills. lol. Though, I do hope we get to see Harry crawl and walk soon. I can just imagine what trouble he'll cause.

    Good touch with Severus thinking the floor too germ infested and hard for Harry to crawl on. That was so cute and totally like a protective parent. However, Sev should consider being a little more lenient or little Harry will likely develop allergies, if the wizarding world has those.

    Super cute, Ivy, and I'm looking forward to seeing what develops now that Sev realized Harry's scar is gone.

    Author's Response: You're review just saved my night Ella! I was having such a good day, choir ruined my night, and then I come back to check messages and you saved it! Thanks for that!! I REALLY needed it. And yeah, I was thinking about the Grinch the other day, and added it in. It fit pretty good I think. XD But I'm glad you liked Snape being all protective and the criticizing. Poor Snape, he needs to learn that not ALL criticism is bad. But I'm glad you like that the scar is no more. You should all get a big explaination for everything soon. I NEED to catch up on all my reading too. Thanks again for the review! You just saved my life! You can still have some Halloween candy if you'd like!  
Title: Chapter 12: Unbelievable Discovery 02 Nov 2009 4:52 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope you had fun trick or treating. My parents say I'm too old for that now. :( This chapter was awesome, especially the end when Snape noticed that Harry didn't have the scar. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response: Thanks Drama! I had fun. We went around to peoples houses and collected canned goods for the food patry instead of getting candy...though some people gave us candy any way. It was still really fun. I had never really gone trick-or-treating before in my life because I live so far out from everything and only went to get candy from my grandparents, so I kinda know how you feel. But thanks for another awesome review and have some candy anyway!!! XD

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