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Title: Chapter 12: Unbelievable Discovery 03 Nov 2009 3:40 pm
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    YAY!!! Yay yay yay yay yay! No chosen one! Yay!

    Does this mean that Snape can keep Harry? Dumbledore shouldn't have a claim on him anymore. Can Harry remain a baby? Baby Harry is soo cute!

    Author's Response: LOL! Glad you liked my little twist! ^-^ And you'll just have to hold on a bit. Things are going to start to come together really soon. Promise! Thanks for the review! Have some candy!!
Title: Chapter 12: Unbelievable Discovery 03 Nov 2009 11:08 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful story!

    I wonder what Harry was trying to do when he brewed that potion; did he deliberately de-age himself? I love how attached he is to Severus. Dumbledore was wrong not to tell Severus early on. Harry didn't deserve to be raised by those awful muggles. His lack of faith in Severus is terrible. If I was Severus, I would say to hell with the lot of 'em and run off with my child and raise him in relative safety far from England. I also wonder if they do manage to restore Harry to age 15 will he remember the events that have happened since he was de-aged. I can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Why, thanks for the nice review, silver! I'm glad you're enjoying it! Dumbles just wants his plans to carry out and he never thought Sev could be the fathering type...but he is! XD And you'll get to find out about Harry really soon, I promise!! Thanks again for the review, and have some candy!!
Title: Chapter 12: Unbelievable Discovery 02 Nov 2009 10:47 pm
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, Ivy. Now that is certainly an interesting way to deal with Harry being the chosen one. I like it. I wonder if that was somehow in Harry's plan.

    Someone must be getting into the Christmas spirit because I totally caught the Grinch reference. ;)

    I loved the part with the professors criticizing Sev's parenting skills. lol. Though, I do hope we get to see Harry crawl and walk soon. I can just imagine what trouble he'll cause.

    Good touch with Severus thinking the floor too germ infested and hard for Harry to crawl on. That was so cute and totally like a protective parent. However, Sev should consider being a little more lenient or little Harry will likely develop allergies, if the wizarding world has those.

    Super cute, Ivy, and I'm looking forward to seeing what develops now that Sev realized Harry's scar is gone.

    Author's Response: You're review just saved my night Ella! I was having such a good day, choir ruined my night, and then I come back to check messages and you saved it! Thanks for that!! I REALLY needed it. And yeah, I was thinking about the Grinch the other day, and added it in. It fit pretty good I think. XD But I'm glad you liked Snape being all protective and the criticizing. Poor Snape, he needs to learn that not ALL criticism is bad. But I'm glad you like that the scar is no more. You should all get a big explaination for everything soon. I NEED to catch up on all my reading too. Thanks again for the review! You just saved my life! You can still have some Halloween candy if you'd like!  
Title: Chapter 12: Unbelievable Discovery 02 Nov 2009 4:52 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope you had fun trick or treating. My parents say I'm too old for that now. :( This chapter was awesome, especially the end when Snape noticed that Harry didn't have the scar. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response: Thanks Drama! I had fun. We went around to peoples houses and collected canned goods for the food patry instead of getting candy...though some people gave us candy any way. It was still really fun. I had never really gone trick-or-treating before in my life because I live so far out from everything and only went to get candy from my grandparents, so I kinda know how you feel. But thanks for another awesome review and have some candy anyway!!! XD
Title: Chapter 12: Unbelievable Discovery 01 Nov 2009 8:51 am
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    "Staring down at his son in the utmost shock, the baby simply giggled up at his father’s face, as though he were taking his revenge out on the world for having laid all their hopes on him in the first place. " - oooh, nice bit of writing there, take that wizarding world ^^ I really like the turn that took, it really takes the sting out of all of Dumbledore's ambitions for Harry if he isnt the chosen one anymore ^^
    And of course this was oh so cute too ^^, little Harry is adorable and little Snapey is getting very cute too (though if anyone called him that he would no doubt gut them still ^^)
    And I for one dont mind the wait for chapters because they're always excellent when they come and you have a life, we're lucky you're writing us stories at all so thanks ^^
    Hope you had fun trick or treating (there were literally little monsters running around everywhere yesterday, and their rather strange looking parents ^-^) and I hope life gets a bit better for you, it sounds a little chaotic lately (hope you avoid the H1N1, can get nasty apparently)
    Oooh, you're giving away shakespearean sonnets? I knew he was alive in your basement! (attic? cellar? shed?... under your bed? ^-^)
    Have fun and stay safe, hope life eases off a bit ^-^ x

    Author's Response:

    Aww! Thanks sprout! That means a lot. I was afraid people were gunna get mad that I hadn't written for a while, but I really have been busy the last few weeks. Although some times I wish all I had to do was write fanfic. That would be kinda cool...but yay! So glad you liked the chapter! I wanted Dumbles plans to be thwarted in this fic, and what better way to do that then get rid of the chosen one? And Sev's getting VERY protective of HIS baby. But I'm really glad you liked the ending line. I usually try to end this with little fun things, but this time I couldn't help but put a jab in there.

    Since you're the first one to mention Shakespeare, I will give you a sonnet! You get sonnet CXXX. And since you're the first, you may look it up on YouTube and LISTEN to ALAN RICKMAN read it!! You get the grand prize here! Oh! And thanks for reminding me to feed Bill. He's, uh, in the basement of my dorm...couldn't fit him in the closet. ;D Thanks again!

Title: Chapter 12: Unbelievable Discovery 01 Nov 2009 8:42 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Happy Halloween!! And thanks for the update - I really can't blame you for how late it is, given my own tardiness. I got some progress done on it last week, but then I got the swine flu. Anyway, love the chapter!! Much, much, fun. I laughed out loud (literally, hence not putting in a 'lol') when Snape flipped out about Harry grabbing for the beaker. So cute. :0)

    Author's Response: Ha! Thanks RhiananT! Sorry to hear that you're sick! :( I'm trying to avoid all those peoples that got sick :S Not all that easy. Thanks for the awesome review, I'm glad you like it! Hope you get better, but have some Halloween candy in the mean time! ;D
Title: Chapter 12: Unbelievable Discovery 31 Oct 2009 8:27 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow!! Harry's scar is gone? How interesting.

    I love how protective Sev is becoming. I 'm sorry that you've been having so many problems, but I was really pleased to see a new chappie from you!

    I loved it too. I'm dying to see how Snape and Harry act when Harry goes back to his normal age. I'm just dying for that to happen. I wonder if Harry will remember all this, and Severus' feelings towards him, or even that he is Severus' real son. Oh, and Dumbledore's manipulations; what will happen when Harry grows back up! Oh, and the scar, will it still be gone?

    See.. as I need some answers to all these questions, you really must update soon! Oh, and I want more of WOTWL!

    Author's Response: Don't worry Pandora, I've been working since I got my laptop back and I should have a new chappie of WOWL tomorrow. And don't worry too much about Harry and Sev. Things are about to get...interesting. So just hold on tight, and the new chappies should be on the way!! XD Thanks for the review!!! :D
Title: Chapter 12: Unbelievable Discovery 31 Oct 2009 8:20 pm
Reviewer: Lionessmon (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter, I look forward to the 'he has reverted so there is no chosen one' moment. I love drama. Post soon

    Author's Response: Why thank you Lionessmon, I'm glad you like the drama. I'm rather fond of it myself. I'll try to post really soon. So have some candy and thanks for the review. :D
Title: Chapter 12: Unbelievable Discovery 31 Oct 2009 5:22 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    No scar? Awesome! That should mean that Severus will no longer have to protect Harry in the way he did before; the Dark Lord won't want him if he finds out what happens. But now that there's no chosen one, I wonder who will go after Voldemort...Sev? Dumbley?

    Stay well, Ivy! Update soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thanks you P.G, I'm glad you liked it. And yep, no more scar. I'm taking bets on who kills Voldy. lol Thanks so much for the review, and have some candy! XD
Title: Chapter 12: Unbelievable Discovery 31 Oct 2009 1:38 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter I love an over protective snape xxx

    Author's Response: Yeah, he's pretty protective all right. Thanks for the review! Have some candy!

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