| Title: Chapter 14: Uprooted Truths
| 06 Jul 2011 11:31 pm
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| Reviewer: Nenefee (Anonymous)
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Is it ok to hate Dumbledore? I think it is..!
I think Snape's not Slytherin enough; with all the information he has...he is a spy, he knows how to lie and pretend. Especially after Dumbledore threatened to obliviate him, he would've made contingency planes immediately. I mean, what's keeping him from leaving a document at Gringotts? Or leaving memories in a pensieve? Or sending a time delayed letter? Or blackmail the headmaster (after all what would he do without a spy and potions master)?
I hope he has a plan we don't know about yet...
| Title: Chapter 8: Underlying Snark
| 06 Jul 2011 9:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Nenefee (Anonymous)
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Hihi, best chapter so far; I couldn't stop giggling :-D
The story is funny, which makes it tolerable to overlook the mistakes in consistency.
On another note, you really should check your spelling, or rather your grammar - you know tenses and aspects and stuff.
| Title: Chapter 17: Uproarious Conclusions
| 06 Jun 2011 9:37 am
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| Reviewer: Bellixies (Anonymous)
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Oh I DID LOVED that!!
thank you
xoxo
| Title: Chapter 16: Unnerving Reality
| 06 Jun 2011 9:26 am
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| Reviewer: bellixies (Anonymous)
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:S i did not liked this....
TOT
| Title: Chapter 1: Unexpected Problem
| 01 May 2011 6:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Fujoshi (Signed)
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So this one wonders...
Suddenly Severus felt a sharp tug on the back on his robes. Snapping his head back, he looked down to see a little baby with a lightning bolt scar sitting on his cloak with a fist full of black material, giggling.
Where the heck did the scar go, since you said it was no more, later in the story...
hmm? xD
| Title: Chapter 17: Uproarious Conclusions
| 01 May 2011 6:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Fujoshi (Signed)
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Sequel, Sequel, Sequel!!! PLEASE!!
Loved it! And Severus' announcement that he'd killed the dark lord was bloody awesome!!
10!!
| Title: Chapter 17: Uproarious Conclusions
| 26 Jan 2011 1:13 pm
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| Reviewer: leanne (Anonymous)
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oohh hell yeahh! Your story was incredibly funny and the ending priceless. LOL :)
| Title: Chapter 17: Uproarious Conclusions
| 13 Jan 2011 8:36 pm
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| Reviewer: hazpotsfan (Signed)
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i LOVED this! :) please please please say there will be a sequel?? xx
| Title: Chapter 17: Uproarious Conclusions
| 20 Aug 2010 8:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous)
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I love your story. One of my favorites! Will you be doing a sequel? Looking forward to more of your work.
| Title: Chapter 17: Uproarious Conclusions
| 21 Jun 2010 11:32 am
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| Reviewer: malimed (Anonymous)
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i'm SO FREAKING HAPPY that you turned harry back into a baby!!!! i mean, the kid kind of deserved a second chance at things, you know? crappy childhood . . . stressful school years . . . and severus definitely deserved a chance to raise his son. i think harry would actually be a happier, better balanced person after having grown up as a snape.
Author's Response: And thus a sequel must be spawned!! lol Yeah, that's how I feel too. I couldn't help turning Harry back into a baby. When I got to writing this, it was supposed to be a oneshot, but I had too many ideas, and then I just couldn't help but decide that Harry had to be a baby again at the end of everything. But thanks so much for the review and thanks for reading!! I'm glad you liked it.
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