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Title: Chapter 16: Unnerving Reality 17 Dec 2009 8:03 am
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww that's just... awww TT *sobs* I'm so glad that I can go straight on to the last one now though... I have no idea how I missed the update for this one but at least I wont have to wait... that's just so... sad!
    I do love how incredibly awesome you are by the way - you realise you made me want to cry in the same chapter as laughing hysterically over this:
    'But that’s when the water wars started and Admiral Ducky began a battle with Commodore Froggy. It was a terrible battle, resulting in many casualties, including Remus’s nerves'
    Very nice ^^ Quite awesome in fact ^^
    ooh... I dont want it to end... nevertheless...

    Author's Response: lol FINALLY!! You're the only one that's commented about that line. It was one of my favorites really. I thought it was cute. lol So thanks for that! XD And I'm glad you both wanted to cry and wanted to laugh. I was going for that. But I'm kinda sorry you got sad...but the ending makes up for it I think. And thanks *blushes* your review makes me happy. I'm just glad you like it! :D
Title: Chapter 17: Uproarious Conclusions 16 Dec 2009 7:26 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh lovely ending thank you so much please pllease can we have a sequel soon

    Author's Response: Yay! Glad you liked it! :D Sequel will come soon. Thanks for reading!
Title: Chapter 16: Unnerving Reality 16 Dec 2009 7:16 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    oh that is so sad poor Severus he does not! deserve to be rejected like this pass the tissues please

    Author's Response: Have a tissue! But you won't be mad at me too much longer. Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 17: Uproarious Conclusions 16 Dec 2009 8:34 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You are right, your ending leaves room for a sequel, please! Would love to read about Sev and Harry growing up at Hogwarts, plus, Draco with Sirius, too good! Sequel, please

    Author's Response: lol ^_^ Glad you seemed to like it! I really wanted to have this ending, but I still wanna write about it...does that even make sense? Yes, there will more than likely be a sequel later. Thanks so much for reading! :D
Title: Chapter 17: Uproarious Conclusions 16 Dec 2009 8:12 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    I read this right when I woke up this morning from my phone while trying not to be attacked by my dog and it certainly made my morning.

    I was very surprised that Harry turned back into a baby. The more I think about it though, if it was Harry's choice, then it's somewhat of a cop-out for him. Yes, it makes Severus extremely happy, but in a way Harry runs away from the entire situation by turning himself back into a baby. This could just be me overanalyzing things. I did just come from my GRE study book after doing the analogies section after all. Anyways, I'm curious to see if you'll address that in the sequel or not.

    If anyone does deserve to relive his childhood, it's Harry. I'm just concerned about what it means in the long run and his reasoning. This way he not only abandons his life, but his friends.

    I am really happy for Severus to get his child back though. I know he'll be happy to have the bottles back at the staff table.

    I can't wait for the sequel to see where you take it, and also for more of "WOWL."

    Author's Response:

    Umm...yeah, I think you did overanalyzed a little, but fear not, I do the same thing. I'll make sure to explain what happened better in the sequel whenever I get around that that. But I'm glad you liked it and it made you happy this morning. The real reason Harry changed back was because the Potions Master at St. Mungo's couldn't figure out how to really change Harry back, he was only able to do it for a short time. I really did plan to go into that a bit more. And Sev IS very happy. And I'm glad you seemed to like the line about that bottles at the Head Table. ^_^ Thanks for sticking with this for as long as you did! And I'm working on WOWL and should have the next chappie up really soon. Thanks again!! :D

Title: Chapter 17: Uproarious Conclusions 16 Dec 2009 2:44 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    A happy ending! Yay!

    I hope that Harry changed back on purpose. Something permanent.

    Author's Response:

    Harry changed back so that there was no margin of doubt left in him to question Severus's love for him. Glad you liked the ending, and thanks for reading!! :D

Title: Chapter 17: Uproarious Conclusions 16 Dec 2009 1:44 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Very unexpected ending--I'm excited to read the sequel!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: XD I wanted an unexpected ending. Glad you liked it, and sequel plot's in the works! Thanks for reading!
Title: Chapter 16: Unnerving Reality 16 Dec 2009 1:33 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    That's so sad...:( I'm glad that Harry's mystery potion killed the Dark Lord though--lol, that part was awesome. I love how shocked all of the DE were. Nice work!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: XD Thanks! So glad you liked it, but it was necessary for a sad end to this chapter, as I'm sure you've found out. Thanks for the review though! :D
Title: Chapter 17: Uproarious Conclusions 16 Dec 2009 1:06 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    I will leave you one last positive review...great ending especially with the Slytherins and Gryffindors cheering his name xx

    Author's Response: XD Thanks so much! I'm super glad you liked the story. And thanks for reading it all the way through!
Title: Chapter 17: Uproarious Conclusions 15 Dec 2009 11:33 pm
Reviewer: shigeki11 (Signed) [Report This]
    whoopie! Baby Harry again!

    good job with this. It was a terrific read. Can't wait for the sequel!

    ~shige

    P.S. thanks for helping me procrastinate =P

    Author's Response: lol Always glad to help a fellow procrasinator! lol Glad you liked the story though. Thanks for sticking with me and reading my story!! :D

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