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Reviews For The Dark, the Light, and the Grey
It was smart of Sev to have Bella make the Unbreakable Vow that way he can be sure what side she is on. I wonder what kind of teacher she would make? Oh and a suggestion-if you're going to have a character thinking while you use dialogue, it's best to put the character's thoughts in italics. Less confusion that way. Author's Response: Bellatrix would defiantly be an interesting teacher. There won't be any scenes of her teaching until later. Thanks for the tip and your reveiw!
Nyx :) Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for your review!
Author's Response: Neville will meet Bellatrix in a few chapters. She's not going to die. At least not for a long time. :) Thanks for your review!
Who would ever have thought that Belatrix had a maternal bone in her body. I love it. Can't wait for the next chappie. Author's Response: I'm glad you love it. Bellatrix is a lot of fun to right this way. Thanks for your review! |
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