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Reviews For The Dark, the Light, and the Grey
Oh and one more thing, did you know a whole section of your chapter repeated itself in the middle? If you reread it, you'll see what I mean and then you can delete the repeated section. Now I need to read on and see who the new teacher is. Author's Response: I didn't really want to kill Megan, it was just important to show how serious the Dark Lord was. Quirrel is going to Azkaban for sure, but I don't know how long he's going to stay there. And Bella's Unbreakable Vow is easy enough to get around. She swore "that if it should be necessary, you will forsake the Dark Lord and fight against him". And who knows what the vow considers 'necessary circumstances'. Thanks for the correction, I got rid of the section that repeats itself. Thanks for reviewing!
I'm so glad that Severus stopped them from hurting Belatrix again! I'm curious about this curse spell thing. Update soon, great chappie! Author's Response: I wish that Megan Jones hadn't died, but I needed something to show that the Dark Lord was a serious threat. And Severus will be able to protect Bellatrix better since he knows what to expect in the Ministry questioning. The curse spell will be explained in one of the next two chapters. Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing! |
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