| Title: Accidental Magic
| 09 May 2015 7:33 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love the domestic scenes thank you
| Title: Professor Black?
| 09 May 2015 7:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A bit hard to swallow that Minerva would agree to this but I'll go along for the sake of the story!
| Title: A baby for Bella
| 09 May 2015 7:17 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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| Title: Time for a Wand
| 29 Dec 2014 3:14 am
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| Reviewer: Luna Lovegood (Anonymous)
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Why is there a massive blank space at the bottom. Is it meant to be there or is my computer acting up?
| Title: Nowhere to Go but Up
| 22 Jan 2013 4:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Rochelle B (Anonymous)
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I Loved it, Sev and Bella are one of my Fav Couples, I cried I really thought Sev was Dead, Poor Bella and Sev they finally got a Baby and then it had to keep Growing, I feel kinda Angry at Andromeda(Just a Bit).
I feel really, Really Bad for Bellatrix she wanted a Baby so Much so did Sev
Oooh. I like it! The only thing is, there are quite a few spelling and grammar errors.
Great story so far, I'm going to read until the last chapter today ;-)
But I notice in this chapter an inconsistency :
"All was quiet in the dungeons, for it was summer and the students had all returned home"...
...and in the morning they're late for classes and school ??
ooooohhh this sounds so good!!
So random correction even though you already finished the story. Nymphadora and Severus already knew each other because in chapter 29 she calls him uncle sev. Also he taught her and says she is his niece-in-law. In this chapter you make them out to be complete strangers
| Title: Lily's Pool
| 16 Dec 2010 3:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Forge (Anonymous)
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I love this chapter it reminds me so much of a very potter musical when dumbledore says "Did you know that here at Hogwarts we have a hidden swimming pool"
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