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Reviews For The Dark, the Light, and the Grey
“That defiantly doesn't sound like fun.” You mean "definitely," and you made the same mistake consistently in this chapter. Granted, I can mentally sub in the right word, but it throws one out of the story.
Poor Bella, that she's not only lost her baby, but not able to have another one. I'm glad that Harry is starting to see Muggles in a different light. Author's Response: It's finished. I do have a sequel planned. :) But it won't be up for awhile. There are some other ideas I want to work on first. I felt really bad for Bella when I was writing, but that was just how things turned out. Of course, things can change. ;) Harry' view of muggles will continue to change for the better. :)
Thank you for all your reviews, they inspired me to continue to write even when the story began to bore me. :)
Poor Harry. Oh no! Bella and Sev are going to be devastated. Can't wait to find out what happens next. I'm glad that you 've updated. Good chapter. Author's Response: Yes, she lost the baby. Sorry, I thought that was more obvious. I'll talk about it more in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad I was finally able to update.
I'm curious to find out what happened; how Severus' injuries, past and present have disappeared. Great chappie. Author's Response: Of course all of this will change in the next chapter. Thank you for reviewing and I wish that Bellatrix was still with child.
I'm curious to find out what happened; how Severus' injuries, past and present have disappeared. Great chappie.
You wouldn't do that would you? That was a surprise, wsn't it? Flitwick? Too freaky. Great chappie as usual. Can't wait for the next one. Author's Response: No worriew, I don't think that I could actually kill Severus. It just happened, I hadn't really planned it. Flitwick however, has been in my plan all along. I'm glad it was surprising. Thanks for reviewing! I'm almost done the next chapter already!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the converstaion. Tonks was fun to play with, I've never written her before. Thanks for reviewing!
And what is Harry's plan? Can't wait for the next update. Author's Response: Mystery of the Dumbledores, that sounds like a great title for the next chapter. More on Harry's plan coming later, I'm still figuring out all the details. Thanks for reviewing!
Please update soon. Author's Response: What eleven year old doesn't plan trouble? Thanks for reviewing!
I wonder if Snape is going to be upset with Harry now too, or if he's too preoccupied with the new baby coming. Great chappie as usual. Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to address all these isssues in the next chapter. |
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