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Title: Social Outcast 01 Dec 2009 4:31 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no, this does not look good! I hope that Ron lives and that Harry doesn't get into too much trouble. Sev is going to be so furious! And I'm not sure if Bella will be angry or proud of her son for using such magic.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Social Outcast 25 Nov 2009 8:05 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    ARg1!!!! How could you leave us with a cliffie like that!!!! :O

    Oh, poor Harry. It sounds like Snape is only interested now to have his own child. How sad for Harry. And being shunned too.

    I hope that Ron is going to be okay. This is bad...very bad!!!

    Ooh, not the story--THAT'S great!!!!

    Please update soon!

    Author's Response: Sorry about the cliffie, I'll post soon. I'm not sure if Ron's going to be okay, the situation is definitly bad. :) Glad you liked the chapter and thanks for reviewing!
Title: Polyjuice Potion 18 Nov 2009 4:41 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm that was a really interesting chapter. I wonder who is who? Is Dumbledore really Lucius in disguise? Or is there someone else who's madquerading as both? Now you have me wanting to read some more and figure out if I'm right. Post again soon!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, I wonder if you're right . . . I'll post as soon as my beta is finished with the next chapter. Thank you very much for reviewing!
Title: Polyjuice Potion 14 Nov 2009 7:45 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no!!! So Lucius is really Dumbledore, and or the other way around. The plot thickens!!

    Ooh, can't wait for the next chappie. I'm so glad that you've updated. :)

    Author's Response: Or maybe he's someone else entirely. Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Plotting in the Dungeons 27 Oct 2009 6:04 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my!! Someone is impersonating Dumbledore!! :O

    Great chappie as usual N_Forest!!! I'm so glad that Harry refused to torture the rat!! Yay Harry!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you very much for reviewing!
Title: Plotting in the Dungeons 27 Oct 2009 2:33 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry! I can see why he's afraid of Bellatrix now and doesn't want to learn those curses. But in a way, she is right. In order to know your enemy sometimes you have to know what he can do before you can counter it.

    I really liked the line After all, he'd grown up with a Potion Master and he'd been chopping up rats for punishments since he could safely hold the knife.

    And what is going on with Dumbledore? Polyjuice? Or something worse, like possession?

    Author's Response: I'm glad that someone else understands Bellatrix's motives. She does want to help Harry. More about Dumbledore coming soon. Thank you very much for reviewing!
Title: Dumbledore's Bad Day 15 Oct 2009 3:46 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay, Sev and Bella are going to try and have a baby. I hope it works.

    And I wonder who broke the goblet, I'd think it was Lucius too.

    Harry needs to watch what he says, some people are touchy.

    How did Dumbledore fall? Was he pushed?

    Author's Response: Sev and Bella's baby will be a bigger issue in upcoming chapters. Harry will everntually learn to watch what he says, it just takes time. More about Dumbledore and his 'fall' in the next chapter. And the breaker of the goblet won't be reaveled for a few chapters.
Title: The New Professor 15 Oct 2009 3:40 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, I hope that Kingsley and Tonks went easy on Bella.

    Professor Malfoy?? Wow that was a shock. Now poor Severus will really have to be on his guard.

    I like Su's idea and hope Dumbledore considers it.

    I also liked Tonks calling Snape Uncle Sev.

    But what just happened with the goblet?

    Author's Response: Bella's fine. Kingsley and Tonks are Order Members ad Dumbledore will keep a close eye on them. Tonks is fun, she can get away with almost everything. Su's idea is something that I think they should have had at Hogwarts, I'm sure Dumbledore will agree. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Death and Aurors 15 Oct 2009 3:33 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww that was sad that Megan died. I hope they put Quirrell in Azkaban. It was rather rude of Dumbledore to interrupt Severus in class. I hope that Bella is proven innocent, becuase after all the Unbreakable Vow didn't activate.

    Oh and one more thing, did you know a whole section of your chapter repeated itself in the middle? If you reread it, you'll see what I mean and then you can delete the repeated section.

    Now I need to read on and see who the new teacher is.

    Author's Response:

    I didn't really want to kill Megan, it was just important to show how serious the Dark Lord was. Quirrel is going to Azkaban for sure, but I don't know how long he's going to stay there.  And Bella's Unbreakable Vow is easy enough to get around. She swore "that if it should be necessary, you will forsake the Dark Lord and fight against him". And who knows what the vow considers 'necessary circumstances'.

    Thanks for the correction, I got rid of the section that repeats itself.

     Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Loyalties 15 Oct 2009 3:05 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a really good chapter, especially when Dumbledore and Poppy got Severus to stay in the Hospital Wing too. I hope that Bella has a good reason for betraying Severus that way. I'm glad Severus did not just have her carted away to Azkaban. Hope Harry and the others will be okay.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this chapter, it's one of my favourites. Don't worry, Bellatrix will be fine and Harry will be okay.

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