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Reviews For The Dark, the Light, and the Grey
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Oh, poor Harry. It sounds like Snape is only interested now to have his own child. How sad for Harry. And being shunned too. I hope that Ron is going to be okay. This is bad...very bad!!! Ooh, not the story--THAT'S great!!!! Please update soon! Author's Response: Sorry about the cliffie, I'll post soon. I'm not sure if Ron's going to be okay, the situation is definitly bad. :) Glad you liked the chapter and thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, I wonder if you're right . . . I'll post as soon as my beta is finished with the next chapter. Thank you very much for reviewing!
Ooh, can't wait for the next chappie. I'm so glad that you've updated. :) Author's Response: Or maybe he's someone else entirely. Thank you for reviewing!
Great chappie as usual N_Forest!!! I'm so glad that Harry refused to torture the rat!! Yay Harry! Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you very much for reviewing!
I really liked the line After all, he'd grown up with a Potion Master and he'd been chopping up rats for punishments since he could safely hold the knife. And what is going on with Dumbledore? Polyjuice? Or something worse, like possession? Author's Response: I'm glad that someone else understands Bellatrix's motives. She does want to help Harry. More about Dumbledore coming soon. Thank you very much for reviewing!
And I wonder who broke the goblet, I'd think it was Lucius too. Harry needs to watch what he says, some people are touchy. How did Dumbledore fall? Was he pushed? Author's Response: Sev and Bella's baby will be a bigger issue in upcoming chapters. Harry will everntually learn to watch what he says, it just takes time. More about Dumbledore and his 'fall' in the next chapter. And the breaker of the goblet won't be reaveled for a few chapters.
Professor Malfoy?? Wow that was a shock. Now poor Severus will really have to be on his guard. I like Su's idea and hope Dumbledore considers it. I also liked Tonks calling Snape Uncle Sev. But what just happened with the goblet? Author's Response: Bella's fine. Kingsley and Tonks are Order Members ad Dumbledore will keep a close eye on them. Tonks is fun, she can get away with almost everything. Su's idea is something that I think they should have had at Hogwarts, I'm sure Dumbledore will agree. Thanks for reviewing!
Oh and one more thing, did you know a whole section of your chapter repeated itself in the middle? If you reread it, you'll see what I mean and then you can delete the repeated section. Now I need to read on and see who the new teacher is. Author's Response: I didn't really want to kill Megan, it was just important to show how serious the Dark Lord was. Quirrel is going to Azkaban for sure, but I don't know how long he's going to stay there. And Bella's Unbreakable Vow is easy enough to get around. She swore "that if it should be necessary, you will forsake the Dark Lord and fight against him". And who knows what the vow considers 'necessary circumstances'. Thanks for the correction, I got rid of the section that repeats itself. Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this chapter, it's one of my favourites. Don't worry, Bellatrix will be fine and Harry will be okay. |
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