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Reviews For The Dark, the Light, and the Grey
Ooh, Belatrix wants to give Harry a brother or sister. Great chapter. Did you erase a review from me by any chance, when you erased the duplicate chapter. Any, can't wait for next chappie Author's Response: I must have erased your review when I delated the duplicate chapter, sorry!
Bellatrix will become pregnant within the next few chapters, and Harry will probably get in trouble again.
Thanks for reviewing! Glad you liked the chapter.
Glad you've updated, can't wait for the next chappie. Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Malfoy will be explained later, it's really important too the plot and I don't want to give too much away. Thanks for reviewing!
I'm so glad that Severus stopped them from hurting Belatrix again! I'm curious about this curse spell thing. Update soon, great chappie! Author's Response: I wish that Megan Jones hadn't died, but I needed something to show that the Dark Lord was a serious threat. And Severus will be able to protect Bellatrix better since he knows what to expect in the Ministry questioning. The curse spell will be explained in one of the next two chapters. Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
Great chappie, can't wait for more. Author's Response: More on Bellatrix in the next chapter. She won't be carted off to Azkaban before Severus wakes up. Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it.
And that thing with lefthanded people used to be a big deal back in Catholic school, because the left hand was sinister and thought to be the devil's hand and the nuns used to try and make the left handers write with their right hands and smack them with rulers if they used their left hand. Got that info from my older sister who used to go to Catholic school. Author's Response: Sorry about the cliiffy, they're just to much fun to write. I'm not going to say anything, it might give away what's going to happen. Lefthanded people is still a big thing in some places. A few of my teachers freak out when I write with my left hand, since I'm left haned. But they don't hit us anymore. Thanks for revewing!
I wasn't really expecting her to be Crucio'd. How awful to do that to a child. I can't wait for the next chappie. Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Voldemort in crazy, he doesn't have a problem with torturing muggleborn children since he considers them less than human. Thanks for reviewing!
Now what is up with Kevin? Somehow I have the feeling that it isn't good. Author's Response: Hermione will get more lessons with Severus, making potions is too intersting to not have more of. Glad you liked the neumonic and Bella might not behave so nicely next time.
Kevin's explained in the next chapter.
Thanks for revewing!
Good chapter. Author's Response: The next chapter is not nice to Kevin. I hope you like it. Glad you liked this chapter and thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Nice to know that you liked the lessons and Severus's teaching style. In some places I thought it felt like he was pushing Harry too much. Harry will be spending lots more time associating with Hermione and Stephen. And wandless magic is always a useful thing to know. Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Good guess. Next time I try to create a mystery I'll try to make it more interesing. The book plays an important part later on and Harry won't being playing Quidditch until later. Thanks for reviewing! |
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