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Reviews For The name is Potter Black!
Author's Response: Thanks for all your reviews! I hope you keep enjoying!
Sirius smirked, “You must regret having taught Harry Occlumency now,” he chuckled. I like that line. As well as the one about Sirius hurting his hand on Lockheart's nose. Author's Response: Ootp happens supposedly in 1995 and she says she had been teaching for 39 and that means she was teaching from the late 50' (1956). But even so I still don't understand where my mistake is since at no point did I say McGonnagall had been Vodemort's teacher. Which means that how long she has been teaching is irrelevant here. Could you please clarify the error because I have been really looking and haven't found it. if you mean because of this part: "Sirius sighed and ran a hand through his face, “You know about the legend?” Harry nodded. “About fifty years ago it was rumored that the Chamber had been opened. There were attacks on Muggle-borns and one died. The school almost closed. But then someone was caught and expelled after that girl’s death and no one else was attacked. I personally don’t think they caught the right person. Nor does Dumbledore. I think the real culprit just stopped because it got too risky.” " “Who was expelled?” “You can’t tell anyone this Harry,” he said very seriously. Harry nodded. Sirius took a big breath and said, “Hagrid.” “What? Hagrid would never-“ “I know that. Dumbledore knows that too. That’s why he let Hagrid stay. But you know how things are. Hagrid is a half giant, and someone said it had been him. That’s all the Ministry needed to hear,” he said darkly as he sat on the bed he had been sleeping before Dobby showed up. The fifty years come straight from book 2 and I never meant to allude that Dumbledore was Headmaster then, just that he didn't believe Hagrid was responsible and helped him. They said the same in the book.
Please I would like to see if it's viable for me to correct the error you found. Thanks.
Author's Response: I know! So Sirius! Thanks! |
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