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Title: Rest for the Weary 04 Sep 2016 3:37 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad you have a sequel. There are still a lot of things to tie up.
Title: Rest for the Weary 26 Jan 2011 2:52 am
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    This is absolutely the BEST fatherhood/guardian fic I have read on this site! I am just gobsmacked at the detail and how you interwove your AU into canon and made it all work!

    I am so looking forward to reading the sequel, and seeing what happens to save Severus from Fudge's miscarriage of justice. :)

    If I detailed all the things I love about this fic, I'd be typing for days!

    This has been an impressive piece of creative extrapolation, and I'm so very glad that I discovered it. :)

    WELL DONE!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    I'm glad you had fun, which is the main goal here! I hope you enjoy the sequel and I loved all your reviews!

Title: Rest for the Weary 29 May 2010 5:35 am
Reviewer: Arwen Evenstar (Signed) [Report This]
    your story was simply amazing, I read it all in a few short hours, my eyes glued to the screen. I hope I don't get killed for saying this but your story was better than the original in some ways. I was very disapointed with DH.
    but you changed all that, good job, hope the sequal is as good.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! Ii'm glad you had fun and I hope you like the sequel too!

    I wasn't a big fan of DH either, so I changed everything I didn't like here!

Title: Rest for the Weary 16 May 2010 11:18 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Fabulous story! I really enjoyed it. I look forward to reading the sequel.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you have fun!
Title: Rest for the Weary 20 Sep 2009 6:30 am
Reviewer: omega13a (Signed) [Report This]
    One thing that I didn't like about the the last couple of chapters was the getting ready for Severus' trial. It seemed like something that should have been at the start of "Life Goes On" because its building up to something while everything else that is happening at the same time is winding down. Also, the Hermione in your story has more brains than in canon during the equivalent period of time. It took the canon Hermione until a Hogsmeade weekend in winter to come up with the idea your Hermione did here. Minister Fudge in canon viciously denied Voldemort's return in canon. The canon Hermione should have had enough sense to get the truth out to people outside of Hogwarts before Minister Fudge spreads his version of events.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, well, my characters are all a little different since they've had the support of not very common adults here. Most parents wouldn't openly discuss what Remus, Sirius and Severus do with Harry, and he then talks to his friends, so I figured all of them would be slightly different.

    The building up as everything else is dying down was done on purpose, or else no one would want to read the sequel. You get to know what they are planning but to see it you have to go read the sequel, kind of like Harry,Hermione and Ron deciding not to go back to Hogwarts and go after the Horcruxes at the end of book 6. At the end of book 6 I got that feeling, "Okay, so where's the next page?" and when I decided to divide this in two I wanted to leave you all with the same feeling.

    Thanks for the input!


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