Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Letting them go 02 Sep 2016 5:48 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    It's a good thing that Albus had backup with him or he would have put on the ring.I really like the way you have done the story. It still follows canon somewhat while adding twists due to the changes in Harry's situation.
Title: Be the wolf 02 Sep 2016 3:43 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    That was an exciting chapter! I can see why Sirius and Severus were so angry with Harry but he did save them. Too bad that Bellatrix and Peter escaped.
Title: In which Severus scowls 02 Sep 2016 3:31 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm surprised that Kreacher drugged Harry. I suppose Bellatrix made him do it. Still, I would have thought that Sirius would be the one he owed allegiance to and obeyed.
Title: What makes me feel safe 02 Sep 2016 3:03 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked Harry's patronus. The changes in his life would have made a difference in what animal he had. Having one that combined his three guardians makes more sense than the stag.
Title: An overdue apology 01 Sep 2016 11:49 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the apology from Sirius to Severus. It's nice to know that he did feel bad about the incident and learned from it.
Title: Welcome to the pack 01 Sep 2016 11:36 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that Sirius admitted to Snape that he was one of the pack now. It sounds like Harry is destined to be constantly accompanied by someone after his close call. I wonder how Peter got in?
Title: The joys of Parenthood 01 Sep 2016 3:39 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the 'talk' scene with Harry and Sirius. I'm sure Sirius took a lot of kidding over that one. I wonder if Harry's form will be a stag or something else?
Title: Pieces of soul 01 Sep 2016 3:27 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I like that Dumbledore has confided in Remus, Sirius and Severus about the horcruxes. He can use the help tracking them down and it should go faster with their aid.
Title: Of brothers 31 Aug 2016 11:53 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked that you included Severus' point of view at the beginning of the chapter. He is in an odd position, loving Harry but having to act like he hates him. Not an easy role. Having Kreacher turn up asking Harry to destroy the horcrux was a nice way to deal with that situation.
Title: When secrets come to light 31 Aug 2016 3:35 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape decking Lockhart in their duel is a scene that never gets old. I noticed a typo. You said the snake was piousness. You meant poisoness. Piousness has to do with being religious or holy.

    Author's Response: Thanks for all your reviews! I hope you keep enjoying!

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