Oh noo, this is such a great start !! Really wish you would continue this
*sniff sniff* poor poor harry.
Why must you torture me so and stop writing here. You're story actually gave me butterflies.
Are you ever going to update?
AWESOME!!! Please update soon, but also can you give Harry his scar back? I lvoe him having-make it even cooler though-please. Also this sounds now like it definitely takes place right before his 7th yr but also like it is sometime during, since Harry was not at all surprised by Snape's doe patronus. Can you please fix this-I'm sorry but it is now a bit confusing. This is a great story (and a good review-no worries); I'm just trying to make head or tails of when this takes place.
AWESOME! Please bring back his scar though-I mean Harry is not Harry without it. Also if you can please put in a bunch of accidental magic-it would be great to read- Because of his ordeal, Harry's magic increased so much he has trouble controlling it, or something like that. ALso please have Snape be his biological father.
This is an interesting story. I'd like to know where it goes and find out more about how Harry survived.
Please update and let Harry find out why he's know dead!
... the killing curse killed the horcrux inside harry? snape is nice to harry because he is harry's father? dobby ate your cheesecake?
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