cool chapter!Please, update soon!
| Title: Chapter 4
| 03 Sep 2009 7:13 am
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| Reviewer: Min (Anonymous)
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Awesome chapter. Snape seems to be treating Harry really delicately without a lot of explanation as to why. Seems a little out of character of Harry being delicate without some more descriptions of how Harry is feeling. Interesting premise and idea that Harry was hit by the killing curse and has no memory now. I am anxious to hear more of what happened. Thanks for sharing the story!
By the way, "To be continued... " is showing up twice in this chapter and also shows up in the one before it. You might want to delete them, that phrase shows up automatically in the last chapter posted, unless the story is marked completed, then it shows up as "The End."
Oh wow! I loved it. I love this Snape. He's so cool!!!! SO, how IS Harry still alive? Why IS Snape so nice? Who DID eat your slice of cheesecake?? I want to know the answers to all these questions!!!! PLEASE TELL ME!!!!
Cheesecake? Strawberry cheesecake you say? Yummy. My favourite desert! I want some please.
Ooh, now Harry survived the killing curse, yet again! But how? Interesting, very interesting!
You left us on a cliffie, sort of! I want more....please? Great chappie.
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