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Title: Chapter 2 23 Aug 2009 12:14 am
Reviewer: Shellie (Signed) [Report This]
    “You will stay in bed for the remainder of the night. Should you have the audacity to try to set just one foot on the ground, I swear to you that you will get intimately acquainted with the words ‘severe’ and ‘ punishment’. “


    Man... Hope the poor kid doesn't have to use the loo sometime during the night!

    Author's Response:

    LOL. The poor kid, indeed!! I'll remedy that in the next chapter. Thank you for taking the time to review!!!

Title: Chapter 1 Waking 22 Aug 2009 11:23 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL considering the website, it's probably Snape. I like this, so far. I'm intrigued as to where Harry is, and why anyone on his side would keep him in total darkness like that. Just one error I noticed - at the very end you say he can hardly 'belief' his eyes. You mean 'believe.' :)

    Author's Response:

    The reasons as well as Harry's whereabouts will be revealed in the next 1 or 2 chapters. Thanks you for pointing out the error and for taking the time to review!!!

Title: Chapter 1 Waking 22 Aug 2009 10:26 pm
Reviewer: Jenna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like what you have done so far. It was terrible to be left hanging tho. Thanks for what looks to be an exciting story.

    Author's Response: Yeah - that cliffy was really mean and I will try to avoid ending a chapter like this in the future. Thank you so much for your review!!!

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