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Reviews For Phantom Limb
I liked the way that Lupin needed time to gather himself (for whatever reason) and disappeared into the pantry for a few minutes to calm himself down. -K Author's Response: Thanks for the review! -Welsh
...it really matters to me, my brain gives a hiccup every time I stumble over one, which takes me out of the story. -K Author's Response: Well, I was never too good with grammar and I dont have a beta to look my stuff over. I'm more of an independent writer, but I'll defininley try and work with the possessives if you say they're that bothersome. -Welsh
-K Author's Response: Thanks! I never thought I'd do an amnesia story, but the plot just came to me and I went along with it. -Welsh
Author's Response: If theres one think I dislike about the HP books, its that JKR never really let us know how Remus handled Sirius' death. In the 6th book, it breifly mentioned Remus at all in the begining when Harry went to the weasleys, and i think it might have said he looked worse than usual, but i think that was because of the werewolf thing rather than the greif thing. But even then! I'd really like to know more about his reaction :/ Anyway, thanks for the review, and it hurt just the same to make it his birthday that day :'( I'm working on the next chapter now, and it should be done soon, I think -Welsh
Author's Response: 'Snape-ism' had me laughing. I think that word should finally be put in the dictionary :)) And thanks. Yeah, I always feel bad for Remus, lol, but even though he's my favorite character- or second favorite to Snape- I think I feel bad for Harry more right now because of his situation more than the Sirius thing. Lupin was probably a lot closer to Sirius, and probably misses him more, but Harry's situation just flat out sucks. And the last sentence made me teary too :( It kind of hurt to write it. Thanks for the review! -Welsh
Author's Response: Thanks fo the review, I'm glad you like it :) -Welsh
Author's Response: Thanks! Thats really the best compliment I've ever recieved! About Remus I mean, I was so dissapointed in the 6th and 7th books because... well, I just didnt feel for him all that much. He barley made an appearence... Anyway, yes, it breaks my heart to have to do this to Harry and Lupin, but for the sake of the plot... I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the review! -Welsh
I hope that Lupin will be able to help Harry overcome the guilt, or it's going to eat him alive. Can't wait to read more. Great start. Author's Response: I know, receiving news of that matter.... well, its never good I'll say. And speaking of guilt... well, I'll let you find out for yourself. It shouldnt be too long of a wait, since school started, I'll have more time to daydream and mentaly write :D Well, at least in my non AP classes :/ I'm glad you like the story so far, and thanks for the review! -Welsh
It's sad that Lupin had to tell him on his birthday and that he couldn't remember. Update soon Author's Response: Thanks! And I know! It just killed me to make it his birthday :/ I thought my 16th birthday was horrible, it was a few months ago, but it was nothing compared to poor ol' Harry's :( and updates are easier now that school has started for some reason. I guess all that misery is making me wanna have fun, and write -Welsh
Anyway, it was really good - the flavour of the pink potion made me cringe though. ugh! There is a glaring error by the way - unless you eat lighthouses for breakfast! ;D Author's Response: Oh, Snape. Always the one to walk in when its a perfect time for a mean comment :D And I didnt think Snape would want to stick around- its not like he doesnt know Harry doesnt trust him, and I doubt Lupin would have let him anyway. -Welsh |
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