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Reviews For Phantom Limb
Title: Chapter 2 01 Sep 2009 12:26 am
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed) [Report This]
    The grammar took a turn for the worse here, especially w/possessives...

    ...it really matters to me, my brain gives a hiccup every time I stumble over one, which takes me out of the story.

    -K

    Author's Response:

    Well, I was never too good with grammar and I dont have a beta to look my stuff over. I'm more of an independent writer, but I'll defininley try and work with the possessives if you say they're that bothersome.

     -Welsh

Title: Chapter 2 28 Aug 2009 4:43 am
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed) [Report This]
    This Snape-ism is wonderful: "It seems all those years of schooling are not lost." Poor Remus. I really am not sure who I feel worse for: Harry for not knowing what happened, or Remus for knowing he has to be the bearer of bad news. I really do feel horribly for the two of them. Ugh! Oh wow. He doesn't even really have a face to go with Bellatrix Lestrange. (Wow, so much happened in the fifth book!) Okay, that last sentence-ish got me a bit teary. I really can't figure out if I feel worse for Remus or Harry. Both of their positions are horrible. Well done!

    Author's Response:

    'Snape-ism' had me laughing. I think that word should finally be put in the dictionary :)) And thanks. Yeah, I always feel bad for Remus, lol, but even though he's my favorite character- or second favorite to Snape- I think I feel bad for Harry more right now because of his situation more than the Sirius thing. Lupin was probably a lot closer to Sirius, and probably misses him more, but Harry's situation just flat out sucks. And the last sentence made me teary too :( It kind of hurt to write it. Thanks for the review!

    -Welsh

Title: Chapter 2 24 Aug 2009 7:15 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter! Snape interrupting luping was very...snapish. :) Poor Harry at the end though - why didn't Snape stick around to help explain everything?!
    Anyway, it was really good - the flavour of the pink potion made me cringe though. ugh! There is a glaring error by the way - unless you eat lighthouses for breakfast! ;D

    Author's Response:

    Oh, Snape. Always the one to walk in when its a perfect time for a mean comment :D And I didnt think Snape would want to stick around- its not like he doesnt know Harry doesnt trust him, and I doubt Lupin would have let him anyway.

    -Welsh

Title: Chapter 2 24 Aug 2009 2:52 pm
Reviewer: Doewke (Signed) [Report This]
    wow.....curious for more! But why is our harry changing though, you got me baffled on that one! Poor Lupin having to break the news that sirius is death. On the brighter side (if you could call it bright) it presents a chance for harr yto actually mourne and grieve for sirius like normal people. Perhaps with the help of Lupin or Snape. ;)

    NIce chapter! Keep on writing

    Author's Response:

    He isnt really changing, his face just matured a bit more - The changes arent drastic, just a normal year to year difference. No, Snape isnt his father if thats what you're thinking, and there arent any blood charms fading off :)) Sorry if it was confusing. And yeah, I've always loved Lupin and it almost hurts to make him break the news.

    -Welsh

Title: Chapter 2 24 Aug 2009 11:36 am
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter
    Update soon

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I'll try! Junior year isnt looking to easy... its all these AP classes I knew I shouldnt have taken, but hey, I like the challenge!

    -Welsh

Title: Chapter 2 24 Aug 2009 10:47 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. He has to experience losing Sirius again. =(

    You're doing a really good job so far. I hope Harry starts regaining his memories soon and that he doesn't freak out too much at the news. Keep up the good work!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! Yeah, greif is easier a second time, I hear. I dont agree with it anyway... And about his memories, I think you'll like whats going to happen :D

    -Welsh

Title: Chapter 2 24 Aug 2009 7:56 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    I like!! I think it's really realistic how Remus is handling this whole thing - like he's reluctant to talk about it, and then, when pushed, he just blurts it out in a way that is almost cruelly blunt. I remember doing that once when telling a group of my friends that an acquaintance had died.

    Author's Response:

    Aw, I'm sorry to hear about your loss. I too am the same way when it comes to something like death or bad news. I'm glad to hear that Remus is being really realistic though, and let me just say I think your 'Life Dictated by a Talking Hat' story is just wonderfull!

    -Welsh

Title: Chapter 2 24 Aug 2009 7:49 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. Gut punch! Poor Harry, what an awful way to get the news! Poor kid. Poor Lupin too, he doesn't seem like he has the energy or the heart to go through this. What a mess. Very intriguing story! I wonder what other things have happened in the last year that Harry doesn't remember. Is he friends with Snape? I'm guessing maybe not, because of how cold Snape is acting toward him, but you never know. Thanks for the update! I was so happy to see your message about it. :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, Jan! Well, his fifth year was completely canon, so anything that happened in OOTP. Nothing much happened in his summer, particularly between him and Snape - No, they never became friends :/ But hey, who knows what could happen? :D

     -Welsh

Title: Chapter 2 24 Aug 2009 7:28 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Glad Lupin is finally telling harry, can't wait for next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, poor Lupin :( It breaks my heart to do this, but what must be done must be done!

    -Welsh

Title: Chapter 2 24 Aug 2009 6:49 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow, how evil, leaving us with a cliffie. Of course, I shouldn't talk , because I do it all the time.

    I loved it. I have a feeling this is going to be a really great story. I can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I didnt really want to make the chapter too long, so i ended it there. Plus I had school in the morning and I was already falling asleep by the time Harry was going down stairs :))

     -Welsh


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