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Reviews For A Better Childhood
I got the impression you took this over from another author...? Obsidian Embrace? Well written, whichever one of you wrote this... lol. Looking forward to the next chapter. Here I go! --his Author's Response: No I didn't take this over. It's my story. But maybe there is a similar story. It's such a long time since I wrote or read fanfiction.
A good start, grugster - I'm liking it so far. ^^ Author's Response: I'm glad you do!
-P.G. P.S. I also really enjoyed the toilet monster. I used to think there might be a snake hiding in there as a kid, lol, so I understand! Author's Response: Around me people told about rats coming through the sanitation into the toilet, and I feared they will come while I was on the toilet as a child. :) I also knew some kids who were scared about going to the toilet as well. Thank you very much for your review! I hope you will enjoy the rest of the story as well.
When I first started the story I was pulled up a little by the Dumbledore/Minerva and Poppy/Alastair coupling, but found I was able to get into them for the story's sake. I am just a huge sucker for deaging stories, particular Snape stories. I also think canon Snape's homelife must have been this side of horrific, and seeing your Snape start to blossom as a loved little boy is very special! This is the type of AU I particularly enjoy. Author's Response: Like I already told you I was very scared about posting it here. I spoke with te admins in advance if it is okay. Nevetheless I feared nobody will review or they will spam me with flames hat this is a Harry/Severus side and my story doesn't contain enough of both. The Poppy/Alastor coupling is in almost all my stories. I'm very glad you liked this one nevertheless. Thank you for your detailed review! The next chapter will be up soon.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
I liked this, please continue posting as I want to see where this goes :) Nice work! Author's Response: Of course I will continue posting! Thank you very much for your review!
Great beginning! The chocolate stains all over the t-shirt were very good! As was the toilet monster. It's interesting that you've got Alastor in there too - that's quite original. :) You said that he would get his quarters back again I think - does that mean he only has to be temporarily returned to child-hood or is Dumbledore planning on keeping them until he is 37 again? Which seems quite weird if he no longer wanted to teach potions, although I could see the wish of the adults to do so because of keeping something of the adult Snape's. Kind of like after someone has died. Author's Response: No, he won't get aged back. Severus just has to live a new life. His quarters will be sealed for him to open them when he finally realized that he already had a life before and wishes to see his belongings. The quarters are not sealed for him to live in there but because of Severus' things. The adults want to give him the opertunity to get them on day again. Thank you very much for your review! |
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